What's Wrong with Spreading Fire in a Fairy Tale World?

The writing is good, it's rare to see online articles these days that don't treat carriage return as a period. To mention a shortcoming, the "birdcage" in Chapter 2 is a new gadget with an unknown purpose. You must at least show its purpose in this chapter instead of showing it in the next chapter.

Investigation report: "Number" - 690 Investigation target: "What's wrong with spreading fire in a fairy tale world" - the male protagonist - [Dunn Monto] Investigation result: [Borrowing a dead body to bring back the soul] Judgment basis: Abnormal traits: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know the time-travel situations of people traveling in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay until June 30, 2026

The subject matter is good, I suggest the author divide it into more paragraphs. Each paragraph of the novel is a long one, which seems very tiring.

Endless Shennong, come out 😡

Yes, children, I want you to live a happy life.

I like it, the author pouts 😍😍

Beast Witch Salheta Poetry Witch Luna Illusion Witch Visa Where is the protagonist? Tolerating Witch Dunn? 🤓(Just kidding) I think it can be called: Sacrificing Witch Dunn

Although the Golden Three Chapters are no longer a fixed popular format, it is a bit too slow to fully explain the basic settings of abilities, story, and background after Chapter 16. The transfer of fire is also too slow, and it seems a bit unable to capture the curiosity of the readers.

Looking forward to it

Down,,, ,,, nm

Thanks to the readers for their valuable comments on this book. Based on reader feedback, the early chapters are now slightly optimized to make the early main plot tips clearer. Thank you again for your companionship and support. Your collection, reading, comments, investment and precious votes are the motivation for the author to continue creating! I hope our fate will last longer.