I’ve Already Attained the Dao, and You’re Still in Foundation Establishment?

It begins with the story of the protagonist's wife dying of illness, and then goes on to say that the protagonist's life as a wealthy and powerful cultivator was stolen, leaving him alone for more than twenty years. No matter how strong Goldfinger is for more than twenty years, it might as well be reopened. The writing is so cowardly that it makes readers uncomfortable.

The orthodoxy is different, and the combat power is mainly compared by 'controlling the amount of spiritual energy in the world'. Before ascending, the mortal path was obviously weaker than the golden elixir path, but after ascending to the immortal world, the gap became very small until it was completely smoothed out. The author ran it many times with AI and got the final version. Let's see if there are any problems. Welcome to discuss—— The Dao Seed Dacheng, the combat power is equal to the mortal Dao Qi Refining Dzogchen. Qi refining is complete, and the combat power is equal to that of a mortal fake elixir monk. Having just built the Great Dao Immortal Foundation, his combat power is equal to that of a Dan-Jie monk. When the Immortal Foundation is completed, his combat power is equal to the middle stage of Nascent Soul. Achieved the magical power of Zifu, with combat power equal to that of a monk from the Yuan Dynasty, and even transformed into an old monster. After picking up the golden elixir fruition, the initial combat power is equal to that of a monk in the Void Refining Stage. When the golden elixir reaches perfection, the combat power is equal to a true immortal who has survived the heavenly tribulation.

Even though a true immortal has become a Daluo, he still can't beat your Zifu Jindan Dao's golden elixir?

After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist has just broken through to the first level of Qi refining. If you don't practice, you will have to spend your life solving crimes and interrogating criminals. If you use it once, it will not last for a year. I have used it at least fifty or sixty times after viewing dozens of pictures, let alone the ones I used before. The main character is almost dead because he just doesn't practice. Instead of writing about cultivating immortality, I write about conspiracy theories about the state system. It's also really awesome.

I just read two chapters, and I don't know if there is any foreshadowing, but most likely your foreshadowing is not up to par with the protagonist's golden finger. I suggest you change it if you can. The golden finger will be awakened only after the golden finger is formed, and the front is charging This golden finger is a bit wide, but the protagonist is... The other one is the world view, Xian Qin, I don't know how to set the time, lifespan, and power, but it doesn't make sense in just two chapters.

The writing is good, a bit literary, like an alien demon. The content scale seems to be a bit poorly controlled. The characters and events in the first few chapters happened too fast, but the theme is quite clear. The system is probably a fusion of the Xuanjian immortal clan and traditional fantasy. It is set in the Qin Dynasty when immortals and demons were transformed, so it should be able to enjoy the popularity of Xuanjian.

If you come in based on the title of the book, you should go out based on the introduction 😴

There are so many people copying articles and copying public fortune, how come no one has written a fanfic about mortals double-penetrating Xuanjian 😰

Practicing Qi builds the foundation, building the foundation builds the Nascent Soul? ? ? ? ? ? ? Are you from a female channel?

666 Advanced Demon, First Level Beginner. After reading two chapters, why don't you stop writing?