One Punch Man: Boros, Overlord of the Universe

I don't mean to disparage the author, but to be honest, I think it's going to be a hit. The writing is immature and the plot is generally a minor matter. The problem is that it's not obvious when it's cool. The theme of time travel is Boros + Zhutianliu, but the author did not write the charm and characteristics of the original Poros, nor did he show the freshness of Zhutianliu where hundreds of flowers bloom. The plot is also a routine of changing the soup without changing the medicine, and the writing style of the author is unlikely to be very good. In this case, it is difficult to make people want to continue reading. The author can refer to the works of newcomers that are popular, as well as the works of old writers that are not popular, and you will find that whether the writing is good or not, the plot and the plot are just icing on the cake. What really matters is that it is interesting enough and refreshing.

After reading it, tell me your feelings. As a newbie, the writing is good (at a level that I can read smoothly) and very talented. The plot is okay, but to be honest, I don't like this kind of fandom that hangs with the (protagonist). At present, the impact of the protagonist on the plot is minimal, and it is no different from the original work. The narrative is based on one episode. It feels very watery to me, with nothing to watch, and no expectations for what will happen next. If you want to write a Boros fanfic, it would be better to write a Boros fanfic, such as Zhutianliu or chat group (but the starting point of Boros is too high at the beginning and you can only write an invincible flow). Single punch fanfic is really not interesting. To be honest, it is just a pure one punch fanfic. I don't seem to have seen a few, let alone well written ones (the author can recommend them). Finally, there is a question, how are Boros's spaceship and his men arranged?

There is an idea that the author should refer to when opening a new book. The protagonist travels to Boros, but he exists in the form of Ultraman, Human Body, Tailed Beast and Jinchūriki. Conditions must be met before he can use his power (such as recognition). This way, it will not be too invincible and can only be written as an invincible style, but it can also retain the characteristics of Boros. At the same time, the elements of the heavens are added, which becomes an opportunity for the protagonist to become stronger and gain recognition from Boros (traveling through the heavens to gain the power to defeat the bald devil), which also greatly increases the writeability. Moreover, various famous scenes and cool points can be copied as jokes: "Boros actually predicted that there is an opponent on earth who can fight you, so why can't it be me?" "Link your power to me, come on, Boros! (Perfect Jinchuuriki Boros form)" "Whether it is a human being or a cosmic being, you are who you are, and this will not change, even if you are the overlord of the universe, Boros!" "Lend me your light! (Sparkling Boros form)" "In order to defeat the bald devil, everyone, give me some of your energy, please!"

I can see the author's own advertisements everywhere, and I want to see what's going on.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but it's not easy to write about a one-person world. You can only follow Saitama or you'll be eliminated. I feel like there's something to be said for changing the world.

You can try shouting like this when fighting

Every comment from readers is the motivation for me to keep writing. The author is purely addicted. I don't want to make any money, I just want to write and love to write. If you feel it is okay, please comment and complain. I like the character of Boros so much. I hope all readers can vote for recommendations, monthly votes, etc. I hope more people can read this book. Here, I wish you all good health and good fortune every day. Thank you!

Overall, it's still very good. I just want to give you some suggestions. When writing, you can think about whether his behavior is really reasonable.

The writing is very good. It seems that the traffic exposure is not enough.