I Was a Warlord in Mexico

Maybe I've read too many fast food articles and now I don't even have any patience anymore. The author likes to bury the thread too much, and it always feels like the writing is in a fog, which makes me confused.

The writing style is there, but the pace is too slow. The problems at the beginning have not been solved until chapter 46. In this fast-paced era, few people can read this kind of writing. For example, I think now that the beginning is just like this, will there be more ink later on? A warlord novel should be about developing power, so how can you learn to be a detective?

The current excitement is enough to make people patiently wait for the hidden clues.

As the saying goes, without investigation, there is no right to speak. As the second person to read the latest chapter, I feel that the entire article does not involve the main purpose of the article. Although the entire plot is compact and smooth, it feels a bit fragmented. I think that the number of words in the article should be increased or subtracted so that readers can clearly understand the protagonist's state from a God's perspective, what to do, and what affects him around him. I don't feel this way.