Naruto: Goku Wants to Become an Immortal

It's not like time travel. It feels like it's written by an eleven or twelve-year-old child. He doesn't have the thinking of an adult at all. Otherwise, he is a lunatic.

Why would a human want to be a monkey?

The ninja world is very small, and ordinary people go abroad by walking.

The story of a young man chasing his dream - becoming a great saint

Is it reasonable for a living soul (let's put it this way first), Goku who knows all worlds (it can be understood that he is a comic fan) to know Payne but not the plot? There is no reason for the skill to be transformed into a great sage. It is completely brainless. There is no golden finger in the Naruto world. What kind of immortal is there to ask for? The highest level in the Naruto setting may not be as good as a roaring dog. Author, please cut it off. You are just writing without any brain.

Too (childish) to say goodbye. Do you think I want to revolutionize the ninja world? Or am I just too ridiculous?

I still don't know the plot, and then grafted the magical power of the great sage, and there is nothing to write about later.

The protagonist is like a child who has no mother and lacks love.

This book is actually a bit of a pity, the data is too poor, but it is actually readable.

Dog licking and mental retardation. If the protagonist were a 6-7 year old child who traveled through time like this, it would be okay. As an adult, it would be as if he was born with an innate intellectual disability. There is no sense of right and wrong, no standpoint,

It seems that the people in this comment section have lost their innocence under the beating of society.

Brother, the Naruto fanfic you wrote is not as good as the One Piece fanfic you wrote. It is very simple. The character of the protagonist is not compatible with the ninja world.

Did the Seven-Tails Jinchūriki become a Kamen Rider?

Too bland and detailed, very watery.

Why not write about Goku from Dragon Ball?

I discovered this book from the Daily Guide today, which aroused my interest in Naruto fandom, but why can't I find this book when I search for "Naruto"?

Can I recommend it even if updates are discontinued?

I see that you like Yakushi Nonoyu very much, so I took it

Damn it, I didn't realize it was your book until I finished complaining? So no more complaints. Just to make fun of you, I deleted a large section of my comments