Purifying the Xenomorphs, Starting with Qin Shi Huang

This novel's sentence patterns, structure, patterns, and writing techniques are completely incomprehensible. It jumps very quickly. Personally, I feel like it's either too cruel or the AI-written generation is messy.

After reading the first three chapters, I feel a little confused.

What do you want to say in your writing? A little too jumpy.

It's just the author writing whatever comes into his mind. It's a complete mess. It's interesting at first, but it gets very boring later on. Just like the introduction, it's purely a fun article. It's just a fun article. Occasionally, there are a few literary and youth articles mixed in. You wouldn't think that your writing style is very good or that your writing is very good.

The writing is good and the story is okay, at least it is readable, but it has a very high threshold for reading and is not suitable for newcomers to read. The main reason is that the character design of the protagonist is quite poor. In the early stories, he has almost God-like power, but does not have omniscience and omnipotence. But you don't know that power is very small. Readers like us who have a God's perspective only know that our abilities are limited. We can't defeat some evil gods like Warhammer 40K, so we can only join in the same trend, especially when we encounter the prehistoric world. It shows that the protagonist's ability is very limited, and he can only dominate some low-level historical worlds, but he is in trouble when facing the high-level world of the Tang Dynasty.

The main plot is scattered, there is too much about Qin Shihuang, and it is completely written about a stupid kid, so it makes people feel messy. After reading twenty or thirty chapters, I stopped reading now.

It's well written and fun, but some of the jokes are too niche and may cause dyslexia.

Why not invest? No contract?

It's too messy, but my brain can do it

Not bad, ✒️ Writing style: medium 🎭 Character: Medium