Rebirth 07: There Is Something Wrong with the Aesthetics of My System

. . . No one likes to have an extra thing in their head that has its own joys and sorrows. System is better than audit. But the system is better to be an AI-like SB, rather than being able to be materialized and personified. . .

I've read Chapter 13 and I can't stand it anymore. Just my personal opinion, just a brief comment. First question: For the movie The King of Kung Fu, let's not mention whether Huayi can change the script, nor whether it has the right to seize domestic publicity and ignore Lionsgate. Just looking at the author's writing, the logical thinking is correct. This shows that the author has some ideas. However, you have been tossing and turning, at least one question has been repeated. . . Well, I have read Chapter 13 so far. I have repeated it at least four or five times, right? It's all about asking and answering questions. We will not discuss whether it is right or wrong, whether it can be realized. Just talk about this writing habit. . . The average reader can't stand it. Yes, it is indeed a free period. However, even if it's free, it can't always be so verbose. . . This should even be regarded as the elementary routine of Water God Dafa, right? Just like those systematic articles, the authors can't wait to review one chapter once or twice, and then review the second chapter once or twice. . . Just change a few words by copying and pasting like crazy, right? Is it fun? Not fun! Readers are not blind, let alone fools! Second question: More than ten chapters have passed, and now we are looking at the shaping of the male protagonist. . . Average; heroine. . . I don't know who it is yet, but the female supporting characters who have appeared so far have basically nothing to write about, let alone characterization. Plot design aside, the author has his own ideas, but not the rhythm. . . To be honest, the author is dragging his feet a bit. What has the male protagonist done so far? If a 'reborn' person really goes back to the past and wants to make a career, what should he do first? Also, the male protagonist was once a screenwriter, but after graduation he worked in publicity for seven years, but the author wrote without any professional skills. He has watched movies, but the screenwriter cannot write a script? Exactly word for word, don't mention this, you have to worry about it. But give an outline, a rough template of the characters, basic flaws after the movie is screened, and simple ideas for modification. . . Isn't this difficult for a professional screenwriter? It's like a chef who has studied cooking for several years. His skills may not be good enough, but he can cook dishes, fry, stir-fry, stew, roast, etc. He has the basic knowledge, right? Then, I stopped working as a chef for seven years and went to sell insurance. Then, in the eighth year, the chef forgets all his skills? The dishes are not cooked yet? What's funny? There is also this system. . . Not sure what the author meant, is it satire? Is it funny? Still. . . Real knowledge? Just. . . Personally, it's quite difficult. Time is limited, and I don't read much. I just write down this point of view, hoping to help the author. Looking forward to your progress, come on, see you in the new book.

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After reading a few chapters, it felt very awkward. Repeatedly saying the same thing was annoying, and the plot was too slow to advance. Just watch the protagonist and Goldfinger quarreling. Fifty or sixty percent of a chapter is filled with these things.

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