One Yuan Per Person Per Day, from Proclaiming Himself Emperor to Ending the Eastern Han Dynasty

At first I felt that the outline was not laid out well, and I had no idea how to develop it. The second is that we don't know much about Eastern Han culture. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, Han people would not name their children with three-character names. In the Eastern Han Dynasty, most people with double names were sinners or low-class slaves. I feel like culture needs to settle down.

The theme setting is actually pretty good. If the writing style and rhythm can be grasped well, the results will not be bad. But the pace of the book is too fast. Many things that can be written are skipped directly. The plot is too jumpy.

You have flintlocks, grenades, cannons, and a team of thousands of people. In the late Eastern Han Dynasty, you actually waited for someone to knock on your door.

The author needs to settle down a little more. This book is just for practice. The subject matter is very novel. I will write about this subject in the next book and try to write more deeply.

The protagonist was called "Gu Shan" at first, but later changed to "Gu Changshan". Which one is the protagonist's name? ? Give me an accurate answer!

Well, the pace is too fast. It seemed that I saw something but didn't see anything, and it passed in an instant. Just pretend you haven't read some of the poisonous points. It's a little poisonous, but you can still take a look at it. 🎬 Plot:

After unifying China, remember to expand to Southeast Asia, Australia, Xiaori, and other places. After developing steamships, go to America, Africa and other places to open up wasteland (by the way, establish island chain supply stations and open up waterways) Also, occupy the resource-rich places in the previous life in advance, such as oil, silver mines, gold mines, gold sand mountains, guano islands, rare earths, etc. These are important resources related to the subsequent development of science and technology, and must be held in hand. Places of greater strategic significance must also be occupied, such as the Strait of Malacca, the Strait of Hormuz, the Panama Canal, the Suez Canal, the Strait of Gibraltar, the Hawaiian Islands, Guam, the Bering Strait, the Moka Strait, etc.

The protagonist is like a fool. Sometimes the ancients were very shrewd, and sometimes they were old-fashioned and ignorant. The reason why you perform all kinds of strange things is that the unknown can easily insert knives into your back. For example, one day your friend suddenly has the power to summon a spaceship. What would you think? Did my friend have his body taken away? Did he become an alien? Did he have some kind of adventure? Did killing him deprive him of his opportunity? Did he treat me so well because he was plotting to do human experiments on me, or did he commit adultery and sell the earth? Some other evil thoughts. This is why people may be grateful, but they are more selfish.

The sweet potato yield in Sichuan is considered high. If it is about 2,000 jins per mu, it requires a lot of fertilizer, let alone 4,000 jins per mu. I don't know what the author is thinking.

The writing is quite interesting, but your content is very interesting. It is too poisonous to proclaim the emperor in advance, and it is too profitable for you to choose the Chu Dynasty. It would be better to choose Qianzi.

In less than a year, the law and military discipline began to become corrupt. You can even sell fine steel and armor. Are you writing about hegemony or political strategy? It's really good to go to work, I can't bear it anymore, I stop, and if I don't do something, I have to complain once.

The pace is very fast, but I think it's pretty good. The reason why the big guys can slow down the pace is because their writing is inherently good, and they can write interesting small plots. This book needs to be fast-paced to reflect the difference.

I just took a look and saw that JD. Com sells armor. It's made of alloy steel. It's lighter and stronger than iron. It's just a little more expensive. If you want to rebel, don't these armors come out?

The settings are pretty good. I read the comments and if the writing improves, I think it will skyrocket.

It's not impossible to write articles with AI, but there are three golden chapters. . .

The author has had perfect attendance in three books at the starting point. This is the fourth book and has never been in the second round. I beg all readers to use your little hands to make a fortune and read it bit by bit. I really want to get into the second round. I wish all readers that the light is green at every intersection. You can also invest with confidence and be sure to make a profit without losing money. The author once wrote more than one million words in a single machine, so it is not a problem to put it on the shelves.

May I ask who the author signed the contract with? 🙏

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Come on, the writing is very interesting.

It will be on the shelves in the next few days. Please read it. There is still some progress. I will give out red envelopes in the latest chapters.

Brother Hui is here for a visit

Tuesday is the second round of PK. Please use your little hands to make a fortune and read along.

One pound of rice per person per day is not achieved in many countries and regions.

The pace is indeed too fast. It feels like you can't write too long if you write like this.

It's really written in such a weird way, it's completely different from what I imagined the development of this kind of online shopping system would be.