Flying Sword Immortal Way

Woo hoo hoo, we are all little pimps

We are all newbies, take your time

I want to read it, but there are too few words.

Made me think I was reading a martial arts novel? Can you be more rigorous? It's like reading western fantasy novels now. Nowadays, looking at the Western Fantasy's "Yizheng Yongzheng", "Additional Points", and other entries makes me speechless.

I've read five chapters and it's well written The pace is a bit slow and has a bit of an immortal feel (but your writing skills are much better than his). I haven't seen the protagonist Golden Finger or external threats or anything like that yet. It looks like a very comfortable little family with no sense of crisis or security. The author looks like a cute and cute novice at first glance. Nothing, this book is okay, I'll stock it up first and then read it when it's on the shelves. Keep up the good work, author!

Does this focus on family development or personal development?

Is the pace a little too fast? It feels like I will soon be in the middle stage of Qi refining, soon I will be in the late stage of Qi refining, and soon I will be building the foundation. Should we go slower, at least one or two hundred chapters before building the foundation?