Start by Working Hard to Make up for Your Shortcomings and Become Evergreen

After reading a few chapters, I just saw the classification of elixirs. From my personal point of view, the biggest problem with your book is that the classification of grades is too..., Just divide it into four grades, inferior products, genuine products, high-quality products, and top quality

The writing is okay, please don't stop updating 🙂

Another example of cultivating immortality in a shantytown, which goes against the grain.

I think it's well written, and the protagonist has a brain and is very cautious.

In martial arts novels, diligence can make up for weakness. Cultivation novels can also be used to make up for one's weakness.

It is fate that we have passed each other. Even if Lao Jun's story did not attract readers in the end, Lao Jun still feels that everyone is reading😗

Dear readers, please read it tomorrow. Old bacteria don't want to crash😭😭😭

It is recommended not to write so many things that are too far away from the protagonist

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Not bad, you can see, above the average level, the only flaw is that there is a "week" in the world of immortality? ? ?

When will it be released? Not enough to see

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Um, when fighting, do you use magic weapons or do you hold weapons in your hands? One moment I write about drawing out the knife, and the next I write about controlling the knife... Let me give a negative review first, although I don't know where to rate it.