Naruto: the Godfather of the Ninja World, Starts with a Home Visit to Hinata

Not very good. At first I was attracted by the name of teacher, and I was very interested in it. Then I started to go down the third road. Why does the system ask you to go to Green Man? I can only ask, why did you name this system? Isn't it good to just call the ninja world cao thief system? They also misinterpret the meaning of teaching and educating people. . . Returning virtue, intelligence, body, beauty and labor, where is the protagonist's virtue? Where is the virtue of the system? How can the system have the nerve to say that it is a teaching and educating system?

In the ninja world, quality education is played, and the author is really talented.

Tsunade was inexplicable, in the original Konoha was beaten to death, three shadows died, and Tsunade didn't go back. Now a former fourth-generation guard is willing to stay after his lame condition improves. You added a heroine just for the sake of adding a heroine. Hinata's mother also wrote that, Mr. Alexandre Dumas belongs

It's a bit bland, and the teaching plan shouldn't be improvised, it should be prepared in advance, and it mentions education. The IQ of the supporting characters must be raised accordingly, otherwise they will look stupid.

The setting of the predecessor is completely redundant. It is better to change it to Su Hui's awakening, or directly to fetal transmigration. Otherwise, it is completely impossible to understand logically why the plot of the protagonist is different from the original work before the time travel.

I have yet to see any Invincible-style fan comics that lasted past sixty chapters.

Interesting and well-paced

The picture of the handsome blond boy is not easy to find. You can just substitute Claude yourself 🤓

1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, it is sent directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?

From the beginning, it feels very lifelike.

After reading one chapter, the logic does not make sense and the timeline is very confusing. Author, your level is very poor.

In the new book issue, there are six chapters about a football match. The slow pace of some books is to pave the way for subsequent plot development. But I wonder what this football match can foreshadow? Online novels are all about telling stories. Readers are looking for information density of effective information, so the narrative rhythm is very slow. If you want to pass this game and highlight the changes in the students' personalities and the development of their abilities under the guidance of the protagonist, it doesn't take many chapters to describe it. How dare you be so stupid even before it is put on the shelves. I don't dare to think about it being put on the shelves.

Bust

Is there any internal investment? When will the contract be signed?

Author, does your novel have multiple female protagonists or a single female protagonist?