Detective Conan: Lao Qin, I’m Here Undercover

Gin's character design is completely ruined. Originally, Black's cool-tempered Gin from time to time was a big attraction. However, you changed Gin's style to a Japanese high school student's complaining style. This way, bullying Gin is no longer enjoyable.

I don't know what the author wants to write, and I don't know the author's specific outline, but just from the beginning, there are already several people who have relationships with the protagonist. I don't know what other people think. Anyway, I definitely came to this book because I wanted to read Conan fandom, not just because I wanted to read it. Open Harem, after all, for me, if I want to read Open Harem and read all kinds of cool articles, I can definitely go to the urban area. For me, the core reason why I read a Conan fan is because it is a Conan fan, not because I think it is just a cool article and I click on it because I want to read cool articles. I don't understand what the author wants to write. If you want to write a cool article, you can accept everything you want and accept everything you should. You can definitely write an urban novel. There is no need to guess the cp here. As for the regrets in the original work that you want to make up for, that's right. As a fan of the original work, I also support it, right? This is not the reason why I read fanfics. If you want to toss Conan, I would be happy to see the results of both black and red. Even for me, a large part of the fun of reading a Conan fanfic is here, and the remaining half of the fun is to make up for various regrets. But the various feelings the protagonist gives me are that I am a little disgusted. I have no objection to hooking up with Judy at the beginning. After all, as the author, you have already set it as an identity requirement, so I think it is reasonable. I also think it is more suitable to have a good relationship with Miyano Akemi. Reason, after all, Akemi's ending was very regrettable. This is where my fun lies, but when it comes to the later chapters and Belmod, and even the possible Reimu Atom and Miyano Treasure, it's a little bit unacceptable to me, and I don't even want to read on. It's not that I can't accept that the protagonist has so many harems, but I can't accept that a novel has so many harems at the beginning. This makes me change from a Conan fan novel to a stallion harem novel from my perspective. If I really want to read a harem novel, what can't I read? I came here to read it more because I wanted to have fun. After all, if I really wanted to read harem novels, wouldn't it be better for me to go directly to pornographic novels? You mean nothing, and it doesn't mean anything to me. And the author basically didn't describe the emotional line very carefully. He just described how Miyano Akemi fell in love with the protagonist Arcana and what kind of thoughts she had towards the protagonist? Why does this feeling arise? None of them are described in the main text, only side descriptions, which completely opens up the harem. The harem and the protagonist slowly develop a good impression, and are even willing to give up traditional concepts for the protagonist, or simply don't mind sharing the protagonist's change of mind with others. The greatest pleasure is completely consumed. If you write normally, write one or two hundred chapters, and slowly absorb these heroines. I don't have any objection to carrying out strategies and collecting harems one after another, but feeding these things directly to the protagonist, from my perspective, does not give any sense of gain at all. It is like a novel about cultivating immortals. You directly let the protagonist have everything in the early stage and is already a ceiling-level figure, and then still being an outer disciple there makes people feel awkward. I can understand your desire to have a harem and let the protagonist have a harem, but you can slowly give this harem to the protagonist bit by bit through various means, and have this process. This is the greatest fun, and this way it is more attractive, even if you say Readers know that they will definitely be able to successfully open a harem, but they will also wonder how to open a harem. However, if you give a bunch of harems at the beginning, it may increase readers' attention at first, but it will also greatly consume the life of the book, because the reader's excitement threshold has been raised. I dare to assert that if your novel does not undergo major changes, it will never be a high-quality novel, and it can even be said to have a high probability of being sold out. After all, you have already written more than half of the interesting points of this book in the early stage. Even if you are going to start a harem for fun next, what is the difference between your book and other books? Can you find more fun-loving protagonists than other fun-loving protagonists? If you open a harem, how many more harems can you open? You can still take in Xiaolan, then take in his mother, and then you can take in Conan's mother. After that, how long can you rely on to attract attention, right? Even if you include every female character that can be ranked in the harem, it will only become more and more difficult to return in the end. Even if you have already mentioned the three characters that can be included in the harem to arouse readers' interest, there will be no others to arouse readers' interest. After all, in some aspects, Conan's fan fiction is not as popular as Naruto One Piece, but it can still be said to be relatively popular, and the routines have been figured out. Unless you can find a new way out, but I don't think you can. So let's take a gamble. If your novel becomes a high-quality novel after it is put on the shelves, I will directly subscribe to your novel. No matter how many words you write, as long as you keep writing, I will follow. If you lose and do not become a high-quality novel, I will not have any requirements for you. I just hope that you can think about how to write it. So do you want to take a gamble?

Defeated on the first line. Where can there be such a thing as social security in the United States?

Is that Iori from Blue Sea?

I feel like I'm not far away from the eunuch. The collapse is quite severe. The harem is so big that it can be considered a stud.

Can you answer the previous question?

There are so many typos. I don't check them after I finish writing them. I point them out and don't correct them. It's weird that my grades are good.

It cannot attract the interest of reading the novel. At the same time and the same type of content, the current situation of the novels in the world of Detective Conan has no original content and cannot attract the interest of reading the novel.

Please read, please read, please read, thank you readers.