Blood-Red Azeroth: Starting with the Restoration of Lordaeron

No, when you write a harem novel, do you have to travel through time and board a bald man? 😅

Can you be more serious when writing? The idioms used are wrong! What does it mean to recognize without thinking, and the undead rush in and kill everyone? The last book was just like that, but this one is still a dud. Author, were you dreaming when you were in Chinese class?

The first is that the choice and image of the protagonist are not good. The choice of candidates includes many "story backgrounds" for this character, which limits your shaping. People who focus on the perspective after time travel will feel disgusted with the experience before time travel; if they look at the entire character's life, there will be a huge image fragmentation based on time travel. Needless to say, the image of the middle-aged bald man cannot make any reader feel a sense of empathy, nor can they feel empathy, and naturally there is no sense of immersion. The second is that the protagonist's behavior style is not good. It doesn't mean that you can't lie and deceive, nor that you can't scheme and be treacherous—but everything you do should be based on a certain degree of "shaping." That is to say, you can be bad, but please be bad with style and style; instead of being bad with a sword on your neck to survive, or the kind of betrayal that takes one step at a time - then we will only see a clown who has no bottom line in order to save his life, and cannot experience any personality charm - because you have not added any charming shaping to him at all, how can we experience something that does not exist? The third is that the overall story arrangement is not good. From the beginning to the present, the protagonist's situation has hardly improved. It is commonly known that the more you mix, the more you go back. Although the author's personal cheating has made him gain a lot of people's hearts inexplicably, but it is obvious that the ugly portrayal and bad situation make all these "emotional dramas" unconvincing. They will only give people a deliberately forced feeling, which will shake your last advantage of having multiple women. The fourth is that it did not propose any nodes to look forward to. Whether it is the introduction, plot text, narration or even the author's reply, there is no "expectation" that can make people endure so many problems in the early stage and force themselves to wait - just like it is hard to open up wasteland, but it is even more uncomfortable to open up wasteland without hope. The feeling you give people now is that there is only endless malice in the book, and there are neither any predictable safe points nor any predictable pleasant points - then why should I read it? I don't think I'll know if I've finished the torture in a month, so why not wait until you finish the book. If the author's answer is that you feel that the core root causes of these problems are inevitably caused by the environment of the character "Fairbanks" at the time and the logic of the story that was actually deduced, and therefore cannot make much improvement—then I would like to ask: Why do you find trouble for yourself and have to write this character? If you don't write about him, wouldn't all these problems be solved? Then the answer to the question is: the reason why you wrote such a bad story and it is difficult to improve it is because of your own choice.

Words like "nodding and bowing" are best not to appear on the protagonists of online novels, except for spy novels, which are barely acceptable.

When I first read it, the protagonist of this book was still a powerless time traveler like the previous one? Can you only rely on women to get things done?

Can't you awaken your memory? It's disgusting to use other people's bodies, don't watch it

What can you rely on without a system? Accurate memory? Impeccable acting skills? Perfect mobility? Super self-control? It's not as reliable as having a system or a cheat.

Coming

In fact, the author would have better fighting with less language routines and more strength.

Is the protagonist's weapon an Ashbringer?