
In the Sun and the Moon, I Share the Eight Magical Skills of the Liver
我在日月同错肝八奇技
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 411k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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194Chapters
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What does it mean that the Laoshan Dharma Conference insults the Three Truths? Gao Haoguang wants to kill them all 🙂
I don't know what the author is thinking. I feel that the characters are no longer the same setting. For example, Duan Xinglian, the bullying sentence, suddenly comes with a sentence, because they say senior sister, I am angry, I am sad. Although Sanzhen people are a bit weird, they are not so human-machine. I can hardly say that the author did not use AI to write it, and then there is the previous paragraph. The chapter about Guan Xiao and Zhao Yan was really difficult to write. In addition, in order to clean up Zhao Yan, the author completely ignored his operation of lowering the bottom line and directly said that the first part was still readable, but the second part, especially after arriving at Wangchuan Town, the quality seriously declined, and many dialogues began to become very human-machine. They were an outline and were thrown to the AI to generate, and then they were thrown in without even looking at them.
Is this how you use the Tongtianlu? It's not enough to put the sun and the moon together, but if you use it like this, it's even weaker 😅
Although but average 😥
Why are there so many incomprehensible question marks? It's not easy to read.
The author has been obsessed with writing about the relationship between Shangguan Xiao and Zhao Yan in recent chapters. He is not good at writing about relationships, and he has written several chapters in a row.
If Tongtian can lead to the punishment of the law of cause and effect then with Daluo Cave Temple and Tongtian Lu, you can become the first dog leg of the law of cause and effect. Report all the things you read that are problematic and make you unhappy.
Not bad, keep up the good work, don't give up like my socks