My Immortal Martial Arts Loot-and-Extract

This book is very well written, which is really rare. But the problem is also very prominent, mainly the slow pace. The copy of Wuyou County brought by Golden Finger was originally very attractive, but it was too long after it reached more than 200,000 words and had not yet been completed. The revenge against the Lu family was not implemented in time, which further reduced the joy point too much. The character of the indigenous protagonist has too many bad qualities. Illiteracy, no city government, and no plan for doing things, which leads to the main plot being unclear, and there is nothing exciting about reaching the bandits' den. It's such a pity. If such a good writing style is paired with a fast-paced outline, it can really become a god in one book. You can refer to the biography of the Wulin Half-Xia written by Tsai Gong below, the main world crisis - the copy is improved - the main world is expanded. Although this rhythm is brainless, it will have a wider audience.

The indigenous protagonist was a little discouraged at the beginning, but the rest was fine.

The content of the book is okay, but why don't many people seem to read it?

Now, the recommendation positions and smart recommendations for new book issues are all arranged based on the reading data. So, in the new book issue, readers are kindly requested to turn to the last page as much as possible (especially on Tuesday). Thank you.

Go to Tieba and other places to promote it, don't write too hard

It's well written. Let's do some publicity.

It is a non-travel game that incorporates the concept of search, fight and retreat games that have become popular in the past two years. It has no special features, but it is not very attractive either. Come on, author.

Although time travel, systems, and the like are very cliché, this book is written from the perspective of a tenant farmer. To be honest, it was difficult to write. In the end, it turned out to be an ancient novel with a bit of fictional history and a bit of simple military. The idea is pretty good, but the writing can't hold up the plot.

I recommend the author to read the part in "The Eternal Sword Master" where the flying carriage travels through various worlds. It's very interesting.

The subject matter is very good, and it opens a new chapter. The writing is too verbose. Too grindy. After entering a bandit's den, I was still writing in a hurry.