Dungeons & Dragons: Wrath of the Righteous

I saw your tweet on the dnd5e channel, and ran to read it out of curiosity. Now I am going to give a completely subjective evaluation - I will not discuss the design of your background and worldview, but according to the standards of Qidian online novels, this is a work that will almost be scored 0 points: The title of the book is large and vague, It doesn't catch people's attention; The introduction is confusing, and no key point can be highlighted; Then I read your first chapter, and to be honest, it's not good to read. The first third of the text reads like a background introduction to a certain character card, the middle third is a meaningless introduction to the world that makes people have no desire to read, and the last third is a character card. To summarize, the first chapter you mentioned first, with a word count of 2000+, as an online novel, only contains a little bit of information: "The protagonist came to hell and awakened the DND mage system." Finally, let's talk about your writing style. I don't know how you understand your writing style. Let's just say it is very bad. You used a lot of adjectives and very complex sentences to describe this scene. The final expression is very bad - no one will look at your carefully designed pictures and repeated wording and sentence descriptions. Everyone will know at a glance that this entire page is full of meaningless water. Finally, the next conclusion: This is a book with the lowest level of starting point. The failure to get signed is not a problem of no one reading it, but simply poor writing. The above are some of my personal opinions. They only raise questions and do not provide solutions. My words are very offensive. Please forgive me.

I am a complete novice and have never written a novel before In fact, most of the DND novels I read at Qidian are also of this experience panel type I only knew to read official novels after being requested by DND friends some time ago. I just finished reading the first part of the Elminster trilogy yesterday. There are indeed a lot of problems with my writing, and there are still many places that can be improved. I originally wrote this thing to express the urge to take risks after playing so many CRPG games, but now it has evolved into seeking everyone's approval. After I spend some time reading the official novel, practice my writing, and then come back and write again

Is this combining the plots of Wrath of the Righteous and Baldur's Gate 3?