Start as a Strategic Consultant and Invade Peninsula Entertainment

The writing is so realistic, and it can be seen that a lot of information has been researched, but the progress is too slow. Do you want to write a long novel? There is too much foreshadowing, and the reading experience is not strong. I think it will be better to save books to read.

Kahuang: I'm really not a sweet girl

Can we add a heroine Seohyun? Don't have too many heroines. At most five or six are enough to hold up the sky. Any more will be pure bulldozers.

The dialogue looks a bit weird, it smells like AI in a short drama dialogue. It's my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Kim Taeyeon: I'm Just a Soft Girl

I've read nearly 30 chapters, focusing on this Zheng brand issue. I don't think there is any need to waste so many chapters on this matter. Let's be more vigorous and decisive. Let's talk about the pros and cons directly. There is no need to talk so much. How much she knew about an idol in that era was nothing more than the amount of profit and the amount of money. She has not entered the society, has struggled in business, and has not gone to business school or anything like that (Ang just has no culture and no ideas). If you ask the protagonist to tell her some business operation logic knowledge, what can she understand? Too many chapters will only make the eyes tired. Most people who watch Korean entertainment come to see this 😅 just to see the love entanglement between the protagonist and the idol. Your whole business... Can't retain people.

This is not an investment in JYP. The stock price of Frappuccino in 2014 was doubled by the time Twice debuted two years ago.

It's hard to imagine that a group of women would cross the line when they first met someone who was introduced by a company agent and was obviously a member of the company's management. The author obviously has never worked. I don't know what the first reaction of a migrant worker is when he meets such a young person with connections. When a migrant worker encounters an employer or leader with whom he has an obvious relationship, his first reaction is always don't look at me, don't look for me. It's impossible to be curious about a strange leader like in an idol drama, and it's even less likely to start a fight when the other person hasn't left. Isn't this making yourself uncomfortable?

The writing is pretty good, but the pace is a bit slow. It seems very bland and I don't have much desire to follow it. I may need to give it a try.

It would be much harder to write about traditional Korean entertainment without golden fingers.

The writing is good, but the number of words is small. You do this more every day. Who are you looking down on? The readers next door saw it and thought I didn't have enough traffic! Now, update by number of people! One chapter per person, 10,000 words!

The main plot is relatively rare, but the proportion of content is not chosen, and it looks very bland and ink.

It seems to be al-assisted? Is it right that written dialogue, especially dialogue, is full of human-machine feeling, or written expression? As for the rhythm, it can be seen that the author has a certain degree of control. Well, the interaction of the characters can be controlled to a certain extent. It is the early stage and the foreshadowing of the characters. At least Sika's description is indeed quite annoying. I don't know why the protagonist is in such a hurry.

Fixed updates every day at 9:00 am and 18:00 pm. I plan to write three female protagonists, and other supporting female characters will also have corresponding roles. PS: If you have favorite artists, you can comment or post, and you can bring pictures. ! ! ! ! Newcomers and new books, bosses please read more and recommend and support~~

I saw the words "invasion of the peninsula" from the beginning of the strategic advisor, and thought it was a military and political article. Unexpectedly, when I came in, I found that it was also followed by the word "entertainment", and it was directly converted into an entertainment article. It's fate to click on it and add it to your collection.

I feel that the only ones Hy can read at the moment are Kong Kui's top-notch ones, and I have forgotten one of the three Platinum Era books. The rest are just little virgins writing essays that have no meaning.

You know, Yoona, I started following you a long time ago

So far, the writing is good. Stay tuned and wait for more updates after you put it on the shelves!

Who are the heroines in this project?