
Arknights: the Wolf from Syracuse
明日方舟:来自叙拉古的狼
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 197k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Is the author here? Has this book been discontinued or has it been transferred to another platform? Without this book, I would be a bit lost.
Too scattered
Rather than arranging events as clues, the author chose to narrate with the protagonist's emotions as clues, and a large amount of space was used to describe the protagonist's too subtle emotional changes, making it more like a prose style than a novel; furthermore, the emotional advancement between the several protagonists was too implicit, with a Platonic feel; and due to the problem of narrative perspective (the protagonist's emotions), Lahode's vision is lacking to a certain extent. The lack of a sense of back and forth will make people feel empty. 140,000 words are usually enough to tell a major event, but Leo is still struggling with whether to choose Saluzzo or Lapland at almost sixty chapters. Rem Billiton has been taken care of next door, the civil war in Kazdaele is raging, and Chernobog has escaped. You are still wandering around the ten-mile slope. Even the progress of the character relationship is still a bit hazy; by ten chapters, the relationship between the two has been close to the window paper, by the thirty chapter, it has become two windows, two window paper, and finally, by the almost sixty chapter, it is still two thin layers of window paper. This is not the information density and narrative efficiency that storytelling should have. When I wrote 150,000 words, I had already opened three story lines. The progress is visible to the naked eye. So many words are entangled within Saluzzo. Is the pattern a bit small? In other words, is it consistent with creative logic to have been frightened about Alberto for so long without taking any action that might make him change his mind or make concessions, just to accept the situation and run exhausted? Moretti, who competes with Saluzzo, the Mouth of the Giant Wolf who comes to mediate between the family wars, Lonicera, who is also in Brunello, the possible appearance of Joanna, Father Agniel, there are obviously many branch plots that can expand the content, but they only restrict the development of the plot to one or two small hearts. Is it a bit narrow?