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Give you the popularity dota2 deserves
I read the message and gave you some ideas.
I was a little surprised to see the author leaving a message, so I briefly read the text. To be honest, as an author and a reader who has read many competitive novels, after reading it, I personally felt that there was something wrong with the author's writing. (If the author is just writing the novel he wants to write, consider what I say next to be nonsense.) First of all, I think the author has misunderstood the exciting point of this novel. The author cannot write this book as a traditional e-sports article. Why, because the pleasure of simply winning the championship is not enough to support everyone's continued watching. Dota2 is different from lol. In all lol novels, the pleasure of winning the championship is not the championship itself, but another key factor: the resistance to Korea. This is a more popular emotional outlet for readers than winning the championship. It is also an introduction that automatically arouses readers' emotions when everyone opens a lol e-sports novel. However, dota2 does not have it. The foreign teams in dota2 cannot bring readers a strong emotional outlet like the Korean teams. (If you don't understand, you can also use football novels as a comparison. Football X is the eternal villain. A similar plot is written at the beginning, and it works time and time again.) Secondly, as fans, everyone's desire for the championship does not actually have enough emotional support. There are some Dota 2 who have once been glorious, and some people have actually been able to recognize that the current teams are rotten fish and rotten shrimps, and know that there is no hope of winning, so everyone will not have the desire (just like football novels, everyone understands). So, I suggest the author not to write this book as an e-sports article, but as a derivative fanfic, a fanfic with the current knife circle environment as the background. This can easily bring about two cool points: pretense and popularity. How to write about showing off, the simplest way is to write about the protagonist showing off in front of the female anchors of Pokémon. For example, write about the protagonist leading Aileen to win the championship on her own, or about some female anchors who have never won a championship, but ended up winning more championships under the leadership of the protagonist, and then write about the reaction of the female anchor and the barrage, which is both refreshing and ambiguous. Don't think it's vulgar. If you look at those popular lol e-sports novels, the ones that don't write about female anchors. We don't have many cute and beautiful female anchors in Pokémon. Each and every Cp is not enough for you. Fans also like to read it. Even if they don't like it, everyone will complain about it and it will be popular. There are also grievances between players, such as leading my Brother Cai to win the championship, etc. 😜 Then, I won't talk about traffic, Pokémon, and the Immortal Cup. You also wrote about it, but to be honest, there is not enough drama. What is drama? Take Milk Dragon's victory as an example. Others are not optimistic about it, but you are the most promising. Taking this Immortal Cup as an example, you can actually replace the protagonist with King Moon, and then write a series of dramatic stories. If you don't know how to write, you can just write Moon according to the protagonist. There are also group broadcasts now, and the protagonist can also be involved. , Engage in Cp, shoot the world correctly, and don't think it is vulgar. People like to watch it so much, which means it has traffic. The last problem is that there are too many original characters. I understand the author's idea, which is to give the protagonist a team to win the championship, but the truth is that readers Watching an original team win the championship, what I want to see more is the protagonist leading his brother to win the championship. I don't know if the author can understand it. This is just like in the lol novel, leading the factory director (I think he is this person) to win the championship. Those original characters cannot bring a sense of involvement to us fans. Finally, there is another suggestion, that is, don't write too much data and character introductions, because the author needs to be mentally prepared. This subject matter is difficult to break out of the circle, and what you are looking at is the brothers in the sword circle. Therefore, no introduction is needed, everyone knows it. You just need to write the key team battles well. Okay, that's all I have to say. I sincerely hope that the author's book will become popular. Come on! ! !
No, you use your real ID. Not only will the anchor not sue you, but he will also give you traffic. They all rely on traffic.
No real ID required?
When reading this kind of novel, the picture is about a sense of substitution, without using a real ID, which is to forcefully create a sense of separation. What's more, I have read both LOL and CS novels, and I have ordered several of them. Whether they are Xiaopu Street or Wanding Boutique, they all have the IDs of real people, and I have never seen any books removed from the shelves. If the author wants to be successful, he should not artificially create a distance between the work and the readers. Of course, you wrote the book, I'm just giving you an opinion, you can listen to it or not.
Is Princess Diaodiao here?
Is there a Diao Diao Princess? If there is no Diao Diao Princess, it would be less flavorful.
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Brothers, I want to try to insert some game screen pictures into the article to help you see more clearly the positions of each hero in some key scenes. What do you think?
If I can't get it in reality, how can I get it in fiction? Give me a serious update
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Is there anyone who actually writes about Dota 2 e-sports? How brave is that?
The video posted by He Yongzheng is below to attract traffic. Come and see how it is written 🙂
A sharp review and some suggestions for the author.
Overall, the idea is quite interesting, and the golden finger design also has its own characteristics. But many places were not written in place. Everyone is an iron-blooded swordsman, so I can't say anything. 1. There is a big problem with the character design of the protagonist. His character is too boring and there is nothing memorable about him. In a game like Pokémon, technology is actually not the most important. Character, rope-twisting ability, and program effects are the key. If necessary, you can consider adjusting the origin of the protagonist, such as Slin, the iron-blooded swordsman from the demolition household, who is not short of money but loves to play, and is a long-time fan of a veteran. 2. Logically speaking, his status is not worthy of playing in the Old Man Cup. But this is not a big problem. 3. The golden finger design is correct, but it's boring when you write it. Because your writing method is wrong. Goldfinger provides the hero's first perspective. When you write, you must let the protagonist enter this hero's perspective. From this perspective, describe what the protagonist sees, what he thinks in his heart, and what he does. How did I make up for this soldier, and how did I press out this shot. When I press the opponent's hero with the gun, what picture appears in my perspective. After killing the opponent solo, I will write about the reactions of the players and commentators on the opponent side (how did this Z cannon hit me) because he completed an operation that is difficult to complete under normal circumstances from a special perspective. You have to reflect the difference between this special perspective and the normal player perspective. Your current wrong way of writing is to write completely from the perspective of a bystander, which will be lost immediately.
This year, not even a single team entered the stadium. The game at home... Ugh
Will there be a Triple Crown this year?
Players who have already lifted the shield in Shanghai ti
New books sent directly to seek readers
It is more important to read the new book directly. As long as you can sign the contract, the book must be finished. I will post it as evidence.
Old comments invite readers
I would call it a direct invitation novel
Deadgame is going to beat 101, do you feel it?
DOTA2 is so fun😁
It feels like you want to write a good novel
But now everyone is more fast-paced. I remember that I subscribed to a novel before, and I won the TI5 championship at the beginning. The following is like a running account, and some people still subscribed. It is just that the early writing is so exciting that people can read it. Your writing is good, but it is too slow. You have laid out a little too much. , According to this situation, it is probably to win the Old Man Cup and then compete in the TI preliminaries, and then win the championship all the way. Depending on your pace, it may take two to three hundred chapters. My suggestion is to compress it. It is best to win the game before a hundred chapters, or to win it soon, and then put it on the shelves, so that more people will read it.
There are too few people writing dota. Come on, I hope the author can stick to it.
The Petroleum Cup groupings are out, I hope xgvg can advance to the knockout rounds
Come on
TI Express, all participating teams are released
vp fell in the darkness before dawn. This time, even the hidden TI could not enter
Support the author by subscribing, there are not many people writing Dota nowadays.
I'm a little tired watching all the games.
Is it so appropriate? Keep up with current events, starting with Pokémon
I still support my brothers
Although I guess your popularity is very low, I support it and give you some recommendation votes.
Can someone who is new to Dota 2 understand this book?🙂
🙂Haha, I haven't played Dota but I occasionally watch games, so I'd better support it by voting monthly.
It's rare to see a living Dota 2 novel, and the writing is pretty good. I must subscribe and support 😡 Come on wow
No more, making history, not a single offline store in Shanghai TI
Why
Cndota is dead. He died in ti10 in 2021.
Yatoro and atf
Quarrel on the ladder