Daojun: Start by Awakening the Qi

The protagonist's personality is a bit twisted, and his family is too poor to let go of his figure. I've read two chapters. The indigenous protagonist looks a bit like a noble scholar in ancient books, a bit stubborn and rigid, not particularly egoistic.

You must at least give readers some desire to continue reading, either by handling the protagonist's perspective and creating a sense of substitution, or by setting up a fascinating setting at the beginning, but the protagonist does not seem to be a time traveler, the innate sense of substitution is missing, and the character description is also poor. The plot at the beginning is clear and lacking in content.

The pig's feet's behavior and personality can only determine the reader's likes, dislikes, and recognition. The more books I read, the more I focus on re-building the customs and power system of the world. It is not good for the protagonists to be too cookie-cutter. The protagonist is just a scout and pioneer adventurer for the reader to explore the new world. The author's ability to create new realms is very important.

It's not good to watch. The author's world view is too big, but the writing style is not good, so it's mysterious and mysterious but you don't know where Xuan is. There are foreshadowings everywhere, and the protagonist is always suppressed. In some places, you feel very happy, but it's like a carnival before death. It's too depressing. Now it's fast-paced. The writing is so depressing. If you don't have a large reader base, it's basically not good. You can chew it when it's really boring. I can only say that it's average.

You're basically a eunuch. You definitely don't want to use your brain after you get off work during the summer vacation. You might still be able to hold on for a day or two.

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Didn't look into it, 🎭 Character design: OK 🎬 Plot: Restoration of Taoism ✒️ Writing style: OK, Not my thing