The Stars Over the Great Ming

No, Zhu Yuanzhang can counterattack Jackie Chan from a white body. After the protagonist has shown his unique individual strength and helpless group violence, facing this kind of dimensionality reduction attack, what Zhu wants is to compromise and join or stay away. With a head full of confrontation, can such a person build the Ming Dynasty?

I think you haven't figured out your positioning. Shouldn't you be the one to set the rules when dimensionality reduction hits? It should be that the protagonist develops normally and inadvertently kills these Confucians, local tyrants, evil gentry, and flower monks by kicking them to death on the side of the road.

What about plowing holes and sweeping holes? I do doubt your composition

The plot of teasing the ancients is very blunt. What is the protagonist's purpose in teasing them? It might be better to develop directly from primitive society, and you can completely shape civilization according to your own ideas. The time in the early Ming Dynasty was not chosen well. The protagonist wants to dominate civilization. The current ruling class of the Ming Dynasty and the order they established will definitely be opposed to the protagonist. Now in the early stage, the protagonist is at a loss, and the communication with the ancients is embarrassing. 1. It states that Zhu Yuanzhang cannot be avoided in the early Ming Dynasty, and this era was dominated by him. Even if the protagonist now wants to play the game of king and minister, engage in immortal education, and finally usurp secretly, how do you write the end of Zhu Yuanzhang? Kill? Control? Or force him to obey orders by force? Extract personality to serve the insect swarm? If not handled well, it will be a piece of cake. Don't tell me that you want to drag him into space, then who is the protagonist of the story, Zhu Yuanzhang or Li Yang? 2. If you want to take drastic measures to gain points to promote the development of the Zerg, the protagonist will definitely confront the feudal dynasty.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Cannibalized all the high-level officials of the Ming Dynasty to be put down. Then the description of them in the early stage is redundant and unnecessary. If you push it for too long, it will be disgusting. Stars is about watching space battles and the development of civilization. If you play with the indigenous people on the surface for too long, it will be disgusting. 3. If you want to write about going to space in ancient times, it is better to choose troubled times. The Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, the end of Qin, the end of Han, the end of Sui... The protagonist nests in the corner of the corner to develop technology, recruit people, use the insect swarm to conquer the world, use technology to pretend to be gods and ghosts to win people's hearts, establish a new order, and gradually combine the development of the insect swarm with the development of the ancients and then rush into space. There are a lot of things to watch and enjoy. Troubled times basically have no constraints on the protagonist. Generally speaking, time is freely controllable in the world. Wouldn't it be better to describe any character creation during the period? 4. I have read the author's previous books, and I hope you can write better. 6 Recommended votes and 4 monthly passes have been given, which is considered my support.

We are all star players, so don't be so pretentious. What kind of woman are you writing about? Don't you know what you are?

We should just write the protagonist as someone with similar Gestalt ideology. It feels weird to write it as an individual.

Brief review after reading: This novel made me feel very awkward I just finished reading this novel, and the overall impression is a bit complicated, mainly from the aspects of character creation and plot advancement. 1. Character aspects 1. The protagonist's character design lacks a sense of excitement The protagonist has the dual powerful setting of "Time Stop + Star Zerg" at the beginning. He is in the background of the early Ming Dynasty and develops extremely fast (according to the time in the book, he can banish insects in about a month). But even so, the protagonist's acting style is very "diaosi", and he is procrastinating and not crisp enough. Although I also like YY-oriented content, when I substitute it, I don't want the protagonist to behave so mediocre, which will greatly reduce the overall enjoyment. Of course, part of his behavior can be understood as him exploring the system and developing his capabilities, but the results are still unfavorable. 2. The image of Zhu Yuanzhang has been dwarfed As the founding emperor of the last Han dynasty, Zhu Yuanzhang is portrayed in the book as a character who is prone to rage and is almost a clown. When the protagonist faces him, it's more like "teasing a bug", with a joking mentality. Although I understand that the feudal system will be overthrown and the imperial power will be eliminated in the follow-up, this approach makes the characters feel too thin. 2. Plot aspect 1. The emotional line is blunt and instrumental The plot of acquiring a daughter is suddenly inserted in the middle. Although I do not reject the harem setting, this section does not mean much in my opinion. At the most serious level, it may be intensifying the conflict with the Zhu family; at the most minor level, even if it is deleted, it will not affect the advancement of the main plot. Moreover, the images of these female characters are highly facialized, and they are more like "tool people" serving the protagonist. 2. The conflict handling with the Zhu family lacks tension The protagonist obviously has the power to change society, but he always adopts a "teasing" strategy in dealing with the Zhu family, with a slow pace and vague goals. Since we already have such power, it would be more straightforward to conduct a "people's trial" directly. The entire line does not look like a real revolution, nor does it have clear political opinions, but more like a dictatorship game played by the protagonist - under him, everyone is "equal", but the so-called equality is just turning everyone into a "human flesh research site." To be honest, after watching it, the protagonist said he entered shzy, but that's not true. It was just the live broadcast that Lao Zhu broke the feudal imperial power, and neither did fjzy. After all, the emperor is gone and the material level has been greatly improved, but what about the landlords inside? To be honest, this part was not written. Of course, the protagonist can support all mankind on his own. It feels like a fun drama about torture of Lao Zhu. There are some things the protagonist talks about about future science and using technology to show off. I like to read some novels that promote the progress of civilization, but here, because the technology of the stars is too high, there is no need for ordinary people to promote technology. The people in it are basically human flesh scientific research sites, and there is no independent plot. And to be honest, social thinking has not changed much. If you want to read it, you can read the free chapters. If you like it, you will continue reading it. If you don't like it, you will be persuaded to quit. I have read the author's Amoeba Zerg before, and I have read basically all the other books. To be honest, this book is not to my liking.

Writing about ancient times is quite boring. What about the promised giant ship sailing over the ancient people? How to fully describe the interaction between time-travelers and ancient people?

It's weird, I feel like I don't know what I want to write

If you ask me to say that the protagonist is raped, the People's League is still too authoritative.