Mage Lord, Starting with Border Baron

What bro writes is like boiled water, without any ripples.

The protagonist is a baron, not a young master. Just like when a young prince ascends the throne and becomes emperor, you cannot call him prince. You can make the protagonist appear easy-going, but the title needs to be changed.

Newbie, new book, please support me!

The costumes are a little more gorgeous, but they still look good.

It's pretty good. Players who have played Baldur's Gate like this type of novel. A squid-like arcane throne. The author's writing is more immersive. For example, the thinking and choices when facing the "fog of war" are very real.

It's written with great feeling. It doesn't matter if it's a little slow, but it's very interesting. On this basis, it's guaranteed to add exciting points and fascinating conflict points, or climax with small routine events. It's really interesting.

The details are perfect, but it may be because of the newbie. In my opinion, although there is a sense of mystery in Chapter 1, the protagonist does not have a sense of crisis. There is also a goal and character, and some magic systems are described, but the world view and key information are not given out. The protagonist is still a local (increase the difficulty)

Breaking a sense of presence in "Pleiades Star Official's Monster Hunt"

Aren't you going to reopen it yet? I heard it's 50,000, up to 100,000. If you don't sign, it's gone.

Farming, farming, or some other kind of farming

Is it so challenging for a newbie?

The beginning is very good, please give it a try, author

I see that now I feel that there may be a problem that the story is a bit monotonous, a one-line story.

This book can't be signed because the author doesn't know how to write a novel.

It feels pretty good, it feels like I'm talking about it in a eloquent way.

The book is quite good and to my liking.

Chapter 1 has a lot of room for improvement

Haven't you signed the contract yet? Come on 😁😁😁