My Tag Is Elbowing the Gods Crazily

1. The first few chapters are quite attractive. There are constantly new things, different novel labels, the corpses of reverberators, the rotten flesh of family members, etc. However, after reading ten chapters, the plot progress is still zero. The content is still similar to supplementary settings. There is no conflict in the plot, so it is easy to get bored. 2. The main plot is not clear enough. After reading ten chapters, I only know that the protagonist wants to escape from the school and the city. Why escape? After reading Chapter 10, I didn't find that [the family] has attack attributes or reasons for attacking. It gives people the feeling that a goal is set in order to have a main plot. I don't know if there will be in the later chapters. Anyway, in Chapter 10 and before, I didn't see the "danger level" of the family. Readers can easily get bored because the plot is not tense and there is no sense of oppression. After reading chapter 3.10, Except for the protagonist, none of the supporting characters have a sense of existence, and the only reverberant who has a sense of existence has simply disappeared. It is already chapter 10, so there should be a small climax or a small BOOS. The author used the energy to write the first few chapters to finish the whole book, and the platinum medal is just around the corner.

The writing about the protagonist's cheat is okay and interesting, but the advancement of the function of the cheat is a bit slow. The character of the male protagonist is not very likable. Such a character is a bit difficult to represent. It feels like an ordinary gangster in school who harasses people every day. The reaction of women is also very strange. Since the male protagonist is speaking unilaterally, women should not give in half-heartedly. This aspect is a bit messy. Then there are the new transfer students who are abrupt and too abrupt. It gives me the feeling that I have borrowed from Kim Dokja but failed to copy the essence.

A bit interesting, but still needs polishing

Come on, write slowly, don't rush, but you write at such a fast pace, can you really write it long?

So far, it seems that the plot is reasonable and the characters are clear, but it is such a scary novel. Hey, it is so scary. Don't read it for the faint of heart. It's so annoying!

Brothers, the author will keep updating, so please feel free to watch.

Where's the elbow strike? I feel like the main character gets elbowed every day.

The beginning is poorly written, with puzzles but no good emotions. Once I get upset, I just commit suicide and enjoy myself.