Yu-Gi-Oh! There Are a Lot of Spirits Behind This World

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I saw Chapter 16 and left a comment. It was okay, but I wrote it in the early stage and felt that the protagonist could not beat any passerby. The deck was useless, and the other characters were powerful and flooded with various cheats. In the end, I was able to win two duels. There were too many cards, and there were only a few accompanying pictures. I didn't even need to read the book to listen to it. The main character had a lot of loose cards, and there were too few channels to replenish the cards. There was no readership, no excitement, and no fun. Come on. There is quite a lot of room for improvement.

Another chapter broke halfway through. Let's read it after a hundred chapters.

The layout is so uncomfortable. When I look at it on my phone, it's all lumpy. Very few people arrange it like this nowadays, right?

Make a patch so that all duelists who are too talkative during the duel will be forcibly muted, and the effects of the cards played will be made public. All spectators cannot affect the duelists during the duel, and the official competition is directly muted. Everyone is responsible for protecting the dueling environment

Segmentation! ! ! Segment it! ! ! Is it difficult to say one sentence or one paragraph? ?

The writing is terrible, not like AI. Forget it, work hard and try to improve

Is it okay to divide it into paragraphs? Your writing style still has a sense of substitution, don't just make it lumpy.