Am I an Eldest Son of the Motherland?

I can accept plot killing. Azu can die or even be tortured to death, but he shouldn't die in such a cowardly way.

The deep sea, storm, and octopus are also very delicious 🙂. It's okay to collect them together with Little Wolf Girl and Franky's team. 😌

Let's talk about the advantages first 1. Compared with the starting point and even the entire Internet, this book can be considered logical and good-looking 2. The characters are restored well, and there is no OCC at present 3. The protagonist pretends to be a child pretty well, and the protagonist only pretends to be a child, not a real child. The protagonist is still an adult, at most because of body hormones He only behaves a little younger, unlike some books where he is reborn as a child and becomes a child 4. The protagonist's IQ is pretty good. It's not high but not low and not low. He's better than ordinary people, which is what people often call smart people. But it's enough to deal with the guys in black robes. After all, that kind of chimpanzee can be a wise man Let's talk about shortcomings 1. Combat strength Problem, because there are only forty or fifty, although it is not very serious, there are still problems. For example, the protagonist's body of steel. Logically speaking, this high level will inevitably drive several other levels, and after you click on one or two skills, the other skills should automatically awaken. You can't say it all depends on the system 2. You still don't know much about the character author of the black robe. I suggest Read more about the original work and its derivatives. For example, the author said in the article that the strongest physical defense is the military man. In fact, it is not true. The strongest in terms of strength, speed, and physical defense are the people of the motherland, but the military man is only a little worse than Azu Of course, these are all the shortcomings and advantages shown due to the current plot. Let's read about it later. After all, this book is not on the shelves yet.

Stop writing about damn Raven Girl, no one is interested in her, okay?

The protagonist upgrades to the fourth-level physical body of steel and then the maximum defense time is greatly shortened because of the lack of super endurance? ? Do you want to listen to what you are saying? ? It's outrageous to upgrade these superpowers alone. I thought it was said that physical fitness and endurance strength are only related to each other. I thought that physical fitness upgrades would passively drive other improvements. But after a long time, it turned out to be a hindrance? ?

Black Robe is almost finished, and let's just say that this show would have collapsed if it wasn't for Zubao. Although there are too many ghost and animal names in the motherland, I still want to say that Zubao is still very cute. What's wrong with him? He's just a big kid who wants to be "loved". So, I will write about a child who fulfills Azu's "love", which is Azu's son in the play, Ryan (the time traveler). ... A spoiler, other worlds will be introduced in the later stage... ... A further spoiler, I really want to see Azu, who protects the calf, interact with Zhenglian and the Avengers... Finally, please read it, I won't mention the importance, thank you! ! !

Or I have a small problem, and if you don't solve it, I guess your book will explode sooner or later. Although the idea is very good The protagonist's superpower plug-in should refer to additional skills that are added to the original ability, right? ? In other words, the abilities that he should have originally will slowly appear in him as time goes by, but at the same time, the protagonist can additionally load other ability strengths through plug-ins.

Does anyone really like the people of the motherland? Isn't it really a chuanzi?

After reading two chapters, forget about suppressing the combat power. Your description of the skills,,,

What a rubbish system. Is the strongest one the military male level? 🙂

He used to be a superman, but now he has become a native of the motherland? Being Azu's son will give you one ten thousandth less superpower than being Superman's son.

I don't understand the author's thinking. Apart from Starlight Maeve, this character is not as popular as Firecracker or the second female lead in Generation V, right? Why waste so much pen and ink?

It is recommended that the author delete the description of the specific intensity of ability upgrades while the word count is still low. If you do this, it will only reduce the perception and easily lead to bugs. You are not writing an online game novel, so there is no need for specific descriptions of numerical values. It just needs to be presented to serve the plot. Otherwise, if you don't pay attention in the future, the performance and the numerical values ​​described will not match up, and you will easily be thrown off the street.

Don't write about a battle of wits, that's something only geniuses can touch. The messy layout makes my head explode.

Forget about system documentation, the upper limit is still so low

Let's re-read it. Readers who like this drama won't like the acting system.

To be honest, the combat power of the black-robed man is ridiculous. No super-speed soldier can defeat the people of the motherland According to the speed setting of the motherland, with his nerve reaction speed, the soldier-man is purely a target, the kind who can only be beaten. There are also those men in the black-robed pickets. With the motherland, If people run at supersonic speeds, let them run a thousand meters first, is it possible to escape from the motherland every time? According to the hexagonal setting of the motherland, in the real world, they will be absolutely invincible. They are not the same species as humans. It is easy to rule the world.

The core of this book is not about superpowers or competition in combat prowess, but through the characterization of characters. Ryan walks a tightrope between the black robe team and the Seven, while transforming the people of the motherland to gain a sense of accomplishment and pleasure. The core is this. Someone always urges the combat power, and in the end it becomes a mess and the same thing. Ryan is now in danger of being revealed. If the disguise is completely lost, the story will soon get out of control. There is no need for the author to listen to those random suggestions and follow his own pace. Movie props should focus more on functionality rather than strength.

Gu Yi is essentially a deus ex machina. The author can't really let the women's federation kill people, nor can he let the soldiers be beaten, so the bald head is disgusting.

To be honest, it is impossible for the people of the motherland to be clean at this time. Even if the protagonist can now pretend to be a son to fill the vacancy in the psychological affection of the motherland, the protagonist cannot keep pretending. No matter how the people of the motherland clean up, without the protagonist, they will still be a giant baby when they meet someone stronger than him; to die a heroic sacrifice to save the protagonist is the best result. If you are completely cleansed and turn around to become a hero in other worlds, it is just disgusting. Also, Black Widow is at least a serious positive hero. She got involved with Soldier Boy from the very beginning, making it look like a spy who has been working for decades only sells his body for intelligence.

I just want to know is this a harem story?

From now on, don't blame saints/knights/elves for not being able to defeat goblins. After all, they can even capture Superman, which is enough to prove their strength.

When will the protagonist grow up? I have no sense of empathy at all for this kind of cute kid.

Support me, will you play with the comic version of Black Robe? I want to see two people from the motherland talking about how they were controlled by the company and how they became villains. The comic version questions how the movie version can become a villain. You obviously did all the bad things when you were not "conscious" and were photographed as evidence. You can no longer be a good person. The TV version is just the comic version. Why do you still want to be Walter's dog when you don't need love or family? Why do you still want to imitate the idiot you are in the evidence? Both sides don't understand each other, and then they both feel that if they were from the opposite motherland, they would definitely not stretch their hips, and then each would cause big trouble.

What would you do if you traveled through time and were a baby of the Motherland? Can you do what the people of the motherland do? To be honest, growing up in such an environment, the people of the motherland are not anti-human, they just need love. And he did save many people, although he also killed some people, but relatively speaking, the people of the motherland can be said to be good people. What would you do if you were in your shoes?

Do you feel it

After entering Marvel, the quality plummeted. It can be seen that the author is suitable for writing about a single world. The author of Marvel's composite multi-system is so confusing that he can enter other worlds for long-term development instead of continuing to jump deeper and deeper into the Marvel quagmire. It is proposed to remove the world of darkness and cruelty, so as to create a more complex relationship with the protagonist and Ah Zu, readers' expectations and the black robe if line that the author originally wanted to write. Watch "Justice Ah Zu" to save the world, become a "good guy", see Azu's "real strength", watch the progress of the protagonist's acting skills, etc.

The cut is very good, that is, the plot structure must be logical and consistent with the characters. It is also recommended to understand the original comics and cut out the plots and settings to supplement the well-known film and television works.

Regarding the taste, it is very smooth and silky, and I keep my expectations ⊙ω⊙. Jpg

I got it from short dramas. Nowadays, short dramas are so addictive.