Before the Whistle

After watching it, I found that the protagonist is really unattractive and his ability to show off on the court depends entirely on the system. The author wrote a female character based on the villain model, looking down on the protagonist and thinking that the protagonist would never become a great person. So why does she look down on the protagonist? Because the protagonist smokes, drinks and doesn't train well... I think she's right. Now that the protagonist has died, won't he still smoke, drink and not train well? I'm a normal person and I think the same way. Even if the protagonist ends up killing everyone in the CBA and going to the NBA to become a superstar, what does that have to do with the protagonist? Isn't it still the system's proxy? Shen Haowen now knows how to cover up and write some protagonists to make his plot better! What's the difference between yours and the most superficial kind of Shenhao system writing? It is evaluated that the author regretted having a dream of being a football player, and then he became a young man and wrote it for himself. Readers should not read it.

Then give the system to those in need, yes, change the protagonist

The character of this protagonist really pisses me off. He is competitive in sports, has no desire to win or lose, does not pursue glory, does not love money, is lazy and prickly, has not grown up in dozens of chapters, and deserves to be looked down upon. He wants to play whatever basketball he wants, and he will die.

Don't know what the author wants to express? An athlete who has a golden finger and can smoke and drink? You can have a personality, but you can't always use your personality as willfulness. I keep looking at it to see when the protagonist will change. If there is no change, please tell the author in advance so that I can withdraw.

There are already nearly 200,000 new basketball books that can't even make it into the top 10. I'm afraid it will be even worse once I subscribe. This book has actually been sold out. You won't listen to me anyway, so just keep trying. Just like in the previous book, you tried your best to praise streetball and even bothered to set up a streetball league. Who can read basketball novels? Who doesn't understand basketball? If you have a problem with your own understanding of basketball, readers will stop reading it.

Are you here to be funny or do you want to show your mentality? It's already over 200 chapters, and you're still not a main force in the CBA. You're writing every day about how you smoke, drink, and don't train, and your strength hasn't improved. If you don't fight, who will?

As an old book friend, I subscribed to the previous book in the early stages, but now I can't stand this one anymore. Treat your willfulness as your personality, and keep trying to die. I'll give you the chance of three more chapters. If you read it again, please cancel it.

Chapter 4 was put on the shelf, and Pig's Foot was banned from the game again, and he didn't even get a chance to play. Hahaha, the author couldn't help it if he didn't want to.

It has gone down a lot compared to the previous book. The character of the protagonist is terrible, so bad that most people hate it. The pace of the whole book at the beginning is horribly slow and rambling. There is not much about basketball. There are almost no good comments about this book in the comment section. It is already on the verge of being thrown away.

The writing is too awkward. He made the basketball game look like boiled water, with no passion at all. It felt like you passed me a ball and I just threw it in. There is no description. The characterization is so rubbish, I don't know why so many people praise it. I'm just expressing my true feelings after reading so many basketball articles.

It's boring for the protagonist to play ball, and it's also boring for readers to watch it 🙂

This is the most speechless sports article I have ever read.

He was close to a quadruple-double in the preseason and is still performing like this now. To put it bluntly, the author is a bit embarrassed. Author, do you know what the concept of a preseason quadruple-double is? Did you know? Many people cannot play at this level in their career. You casually assigned this level of data to the protagonist in the preseason, so don't blame me for using this level to judge the logic of this article. Qualifying a quadruple-double in the preseason, anyone can realize his huge potential. Don't think too much, the main starting lineup has already been arranged for others, and they will play an average of 36 minutes per game without any rest. You also wrote in the article that his singles efficiency in the training matches was pretty good. He competed with the centers in his own team and was able to control the centers he faced directly. Why do you bother? You might as well have been more open-minded about cheating in the first place. Don't open it so much, why rush to press it now? It can't be pressed, and it's illogical. It's exactly the same as the crooked-mouthed Dragon King. Do you think there is any difference between your article and the Crooked Dragon King? Three years later. The God of War returns. You are already so open to cheating now. You might as well just follow the cheating path and speed through CBA directly in one or two years. Why bother to pressure him now? Let me put it bluntly, a quadruple-double in the preseason is the coach's father. Did you know? That's the coach's dad. Don't talk about smoking and drinking, don't talk about off-field factors such as not training, being lazy in training, staying up late at night, etc. The professional arena only requires winning. Statistics of the protagonist of the novel: 9 points, 13 rebounds, 10 assists, 8 blocks, 2 steals · Real-life case: Zou Yuchen (2026): 13 points, 10 rebounds, 1 assist, 8 blocks - reaching the number of blocks, but the assists are far less. · Real-life case: Yao Ming (2000 Finals): 32 points, 21 rebounds, 2 assists, 8 blocks - the blocks met the standard, but the assists were also insufficient. · Real-life case: Yang Hansen (2024): 14 points, 13 rebounds, 8 assists, 5 blocks - The rebounds and assists are close, but there is a gap in blocks. · Real-life case: Hu Xuefeng (2004): 16 points, 10 rebounds, 12 assists, 10 steals - the only official "quadruple-double", but the data composition is completely different (no blocks). It can be seen from these comparisons: · The combination of "8 blocks + 10 assists" has never appeared: 8 blocks are rare, and it is even more difficult for a center to get 10 assists. In history, there have been only 14 times of "10 rebounds + 8 assists + 5 blocks", and 12 of them were foreign players. · "Quasi-quadruple-double" is extremely rare: CBA official "quadruple-double" has only been achieved by Hu Xuefeng once. Foreign aid Jones once scored a "quadruple double" with 34 points, 18 rebounds, 10 assists and 9 steals. It can be seen that the "quasi quadruple double" data itself is also very rare. Therefore, the data written by the author cannot be found in the actual CBA statistics book.

It's far behind compared to the previous one, and it's not that exciting. I'm still in CBA after more than 100 chapters and can't join the main force. The biggest problem is that the protagonist's professional attitude is too bad. He smokes and drinks and has one-night stands, and he's not active in training. If there are no plug-ins, he can't even join the CBA. It's like 88.

In fact, the start is okay, and the character of the protagonist is acceptable. After all, the foreshadowing is reasonable. But it can't always be like this. Competitive sports have no desire to win and lose, and they keep failing. This is wrong! I have always wanted to wait for the point where the protagonist changes and regains the heart of competition, but I have never been able to wait for it. To be honest, I am quite disappointed. The most important thing is that the protagonist is so miserable, as if the whole world is sorry. He really has no personality charm. It's okay to be independent, but he has no attitude and no ability. If you still act independent, shouldn't others look down on you?

After all, basketball is a sport of strong confrontation. The protagonist usually smokes and drinks, does not train hard, and goes out to have one-night stands before he is famous. If there are no cheats, he will be useless in an instant. I can't imagine why the author created such a character. I prefer the author's previous book. The early chapters were really good, and he wrote about street basketball, Douyin, and finding CBA teams. It felt like a high-ranked player playing against a lower-ranked player and crushing them. It was very satisfying. But after entering the NBA, I felt that it was not that enjoyable to read, because the previous part was really possible, such as Yao Ming and Yi Jianlian, but later in the NBA, it felt like a fantasy. I haven't subscribed to it since and haven't finished it yet. This book is also about Douyin Basketball. I think CBA is okay, but the character design is so bad.

The previous book was well written in China in the early stages, but it will be hard to explain later in the NBA. Don't make the same mistake as the previous book with this one.

The character development of the main character is rubbish. I feel like I have no self-discipline or competitiveness. I don't see any sense of ambition or gain in the protagonist.

If you press it again, you'll have to leave. It's a pure literary disease.

Well written, big ball is not good because of profit, all parties have to eat the cake, even if the cake is small, it is not worth eating so much, so the women's volleyball team and women's football team are good, but who doesn't want to take a bite of such a big cake of men's football and men's basketball? The national team roster is a naked cake-sharing scene, not to win, but to balance the interests of all parties.

Reading the comments section, I thought the protagonist was very unlikable, but it turned out that the protagonist was quite normal. After three years on the bench, nothing really matters anymore. After having a system, I also planned my career, and I really like the protagonist's point of view. Even if you go up without relying on anything else, you will fall down.

The author who wrote this book is a total loser. Do you feel that he has never pretended to be cool in reality? This is pure fantasy.

When did domestic basketball articles become popular? Like this basketball article, the protagonist of more than 200 chapters is still playing in the domestic CBA, and he has not yet made it to the starting lineup, let alone the main team, but the author is the NBA's super power, unable to complain.

This plot is too grinding. How long does it take to write a CBA story? And if I keep going at this pace, I feel like I will be in CBA next season. If I want to write about growth, it should reflect the protagonist's experience and growth. Let's put aside this grind, be brave in the game, drink and pick up girls after the game, hurry up and speed up the pace, otherwise it will be really ugly.

I don't know much about domestic basketball, so I thought it was quite interesting.

The character is distinct and the characters are well created. Good luck to the author. I have already voted for the monthly vote.

I feel like the basketball articles are relatively well written. A basketball novice like me can understand it and enjoy reading it.

I practiced hard when the system didn't come, and now that the system has come, I still practice hard. So isn't the system in vain?

After watching the men's basketball team lose to New Zealand, it adds a lot of suspense to the World Cup preliminaries at the end of the month.

The relationship with the fans should be better, and don't write so many toxic points against the fans. Fans can put pressure on the club and the national team. Don't write about the NBA. The last book about the NBA was very bad.