I Didn't Know That an Agent Couple Adopted a Superpower

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Jiandie Playhouse x Saiki Kusuo x Gintama You can look forward to it

🎬 Plot: Is the spy playing house? Poisonous weeds, grain grass and fairy grass are not enough to judge. Just talking about the excitement of the plot, it is indeed a good plot, but the author's proportion problem and writing ability are not up to the level of fairy grass. But because of the subject matter, what I have seen so far can only be said to be rigid. The grain and grass level themes are very good. As long as the writing is not too bad, or if it is run with AI, it will not reach the level of poisonous weeds.

I can't hold my breath after seeing the introduction~ There is basically no spy plot... So why design an agent couple~ Just imitate them?

I actually saw Zi Gongxiang's novel at the starting point 😅

Mr. And Mrs. Smith? That's a good match, they both like to adopt. 🙂

Neta's version of spy house, the style is still humorous and interesting

Fortunately, it hasn't been put on the shelves yet. As I said, it will be updated once a day. Who do you think you are, the author?

There are many people appearing in just a few chapters, and none of them have names, or the names only appear in the middle of the description, and it is completely unclear who is doing what. An example from the book is that a woman appears in the closet at the beginning (probably), and then the protagonist's parents compete in a steaming competition. As a result, another man appears in the steam room. When they come out, the woman outside the steam room should be from the closet before. I have no idea what the meaning of this is. Is there any need for them to appear? Forget about listening to books, even those who read them feel confused and can't tell who is who.

As the title says, please give me an accurate reply. I won't wait for this book if you cut it.

Generally speaking, the content is not much different from the anime direction. It lacks a sense of expectation. I hope the author can write some interesting content.

I'm just going to retell the story of spy playing house with a few names changed.

Is the protagonist's name borrowed from an anime?

There are too many character names and it's a bit jumpy

The title of the book, why do I think of it as the mistress of an unknown agent?

This family relationship routine seems to have been seen somewhere before.

This Qing Shuiqing is quite annoying, and why would the protagonist, a superpower, be manipulated by this person?

I like this book

The plot is quite interesting, but the character names are not very recognizable. Voices and dialogue are separated by single and double quotation marks. It's easy to get confused if you don't pay attention. Especially when the voice is followed by dialogue, it would be easier to read if you add some distinction.

Vision Spy Play House

How should I put it? It felt too messy and made me feel dizzy, including the dialogue.

Very skillful comic-style rhythm control, this is not so much a novel as a text version of comics. It is recommended that readers do not read this novel with the rhythm and habits of reading ordinary novels, but treat the plot development and character expression from the perspective and logic of reading comics, because what the author essentially presents is not "paragraphs" but "storyboards". If you understand this, you won't feel that this novel is "too confusing" or "too illogical". In addition, although this is a daily funny and nonsensical novel, in order to satisfy the reading habits of Qidian readers, it is recommended to appropriately reduce the plots that often appear in "Spy Playing House" and "Saiki Kusuo", such as "the protagonist has to suffer due to misunderstandings, carelessness, and keeping a low profile" and "the protagonist is in trouble due to some kind of mistake", because this will cause readers to think that the protagonist is in an uncontrollable and pushed position, or that the protagonist is not strong enough. If there must be a similar incident to promote the development of the incident, it is recommended that the protagonist participate in a higher status such as a rescuer or a bystander, rather than the incident occurring due to the protagonist's own mistakes.

Taking the change in the protagonist's ability as a watershed Your story has reached the next volume The main theme of the previous volume is schooling, but schooling and superpowers are not bound. On the contrary, when encountering clear water, clear water changes rapidly. But the portrayal of the important character Qing Shuiqing is not pleasing. Although the protagonist possesses the outrageous superpower of God's Shepherd, he is passive at every turn, and his personal mobility and character arc are dim. The result is that the two protagonists make the plot slide downwards. I guess that the author of these two chapters is trying to rekindle the reader's interest by creating emotional explosions. But as mentioned above, the plot is slipping, and the already unpleasant Qing Shui Qing will exacerbate this process because of his actions. As for this explosive point, when writing it, the author probably did not think about how to deal with it. So, I got stuck. No matter how I write, I am not satisfied. In addition to the negative feedback caused by the recent decline, and perhaps some things in life, I have stopped updating. Originally I had some suggestions, but it's 12 o'clock when I write this and I'm going to bed~ See you again if I have the chance. Maybe I'll check it out after the update.

😥 If this is an anime, I can still watch it, but the text is a bit incomprehensible.

No, it's too messy and my brain can't react.

When I saw Chapter 29, the names were so confusing that I couldn't distinguish the priorities. I couldn't tell who was who.

A large paragraph was repeated twice, and my mind was confused.

It's quite fun, cheers for the author

It's so confusing. There are so many characters appearing in Chapter 1, and more characters appearing later.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~