
Swallowed Star: I, Hong, Can Simulate the Future Without End
吞噬星空:我,洪,无限推演
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 949k Words
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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201Chapters
156Votes
524Recs
3.5kFans
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Difficult to stretch
Your expressiveness is too exaggerated. The Stellar Level 4 + Ninth Level Realm is indeed quite strong, but it is not so strong that it can tear apart space with one shot and directly explode three C-level battleships, right? Which fanfic did you get the idea from? ? ?
You can redefine it, but don't change the original one. If you change the original one, you'll just have the Devouring Star Skin.
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There are too many mistakes, and some people have been pointing them out in chapter and paragraph reviews, but they haven't corrected them yet.
After reading the previous article, I heard that the author has made a lot of changes. But there are still some inconsistencies with the original work. First, there are functional virtual universe helmets on the earth, which are not available in the original novel. Although some anonymous helmets are logically normal, I remember that the renewal time for anonymous helmets cannot be too long, so they should all have expired. Secondly, the secret blockade of the Dark Universe's return does not seem to be reflected?
I'm not going to complain, Hong's own talent is very strong, but it is covered up by the halo of the protagonist Luo Feng hanging on the wall. I remember that in the original book, he was not much slower than Luo Feng in becoming the Lord of the Universe and the True God. If Luo Feng hadn't been there, he might have been the new Lord of the Universe of the human race. As a result, if you give him such a big deal, the initial performance of the universe will be similar to Luo Feng, alas.
I used to think that the author would listen to the advice and would correct it when encountering obvious unreasonable or wrong parts of the second design! Now I realize that I am optimistic. If you don't change it, you should get familiar with the original work! For example, in the Sea of Illusions and Phantom Demons, both can reach the 9th level. In the original novel, Hong and Lei Shen, who were not considered core geniuses, also reached the 21st and 15th levels of the Universe respectively. The author did a good job. Not only did he write the third level of mind cultivation incorrectly, he also abolished the innate advantage of Earthlings in the Sea of Illusions. Hong actually reached the limit at the 12th level. Then Luo Feng and Lei Shen will be written as being inferior to even the Phantom Demons? ! Moreover, when trying to break through the overpass, you actually have to start over from the beginning every time. Isn't there something wrong with it?
It is recommended that the author read more chapter reviews and comments. Some point out mistakes and some give good suggestions. After all, the purpose of writing is to show readers and not to please oneself.
Regarding some setting issues
Some settings have been adapted a second time, which may be somewhat different from the original settings in Swallowing Starry Sky.
Randomly writing, the setting changes are beyond recognition, and they are contradictory. Even the underlying logic is contradictory: For example, the small universe of the strongest has become the kingdom of God, so how did the initial universe come about? How to survive in the first and second era of reincarnation, and the Holy Land Universe! People from the first and second reincarnation eras can actually travel to the original universe, such as the original starry sky, and the forces of the original universe. The universe was pushed aside in its early stages! ! Sometimes the same chapter is full of contradictory writing, and there is a strong smell of AI. It is recommended not to click in and read it before you click on it. Not to mention it is a waste of money and you will be disgusted.