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I've read a little bit, and it's a bit too bland and everyday. The first few chapters are so bland, not particularly exciting to keep people reading, or they need a bit of suspense.

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1. Each chapter is too long, it seems to be more than 50 pages, which is tens of thousands of words. 2. The details are not handled well, and there are too many details. 3. The introduction is not very attractive. It might be better to put some interesting plots, or plot slices to portray abilities.

I feel that what the author writes is not a novel, but life. The life of a person who has lost his memory is thrown into that world. There is no main line. It is exciting occasionally, but it is not very thrilling. It is too bland, like broth sprinkled with MSG. It is not unpleasant but has no memory points.