I Have Never Forgotten

Normally I like to write a critical review of the first chapter, but I didn't. I wrote it as a review. No, it's not a review, just my superficial personal opinion. You seem to like to use "but" very much, and you like to use the word order "what is it, no, he is not". Occasionally, when I watch it, I will feel an emotional change. If I watch it too much, it will be like the dry skin on the corner of Wang Lang's mouth in "The Wolf", which has to be licked when there is nothing wrong. Getting back to the subject, why did I say it was written as a review instead of a critical review. Because your book, from my perspective, is creating a new genre. You constantly switch perspectives, allowing the perspective to continue to a certain extent, but the essence is completely isolated. Finally, at a certain point, the turn will bring repeated superposition of starting power. The idea is very good. But, do you know why "The Strange Fairy" is so popular? Not because the writing method is novel, not because it creates a new genre, but because it can make people read it first. Currently, from my perspective, you have failed to do this. I tried hard to keep reading, but your works did not give me the desire to continue. When I saw your reply to readers: "I will understand it later." I started to write this review. The back, the back may be really exciting. I bought a piece of truth from a big guy for 18.88 Yuan, and now I will give it to you for free. The first priority of the first chapter of an online article is not how beautiful it is, how awesome the setting is, or how delicate the writing is. Those are not important. What is important is that readers are willing to read the second chapter. If you can get readers to read Chapter 2 smoothly, then you have succeeded. If you can make readers eager to read Chapter 2, you will basically become popular. You can make readers scratch their heads because they can't get to Chapter 2. Then you are not far from the great god. What about the important task of Chapter 2? Click to open Chapter 3, and so on. You can create a new genre, you can have your own ingenuity, there is no problem with this. But, the premise is that you can keep readers reading. In the fast-paced era of online writing, let alone the fragrance of wine and the depth of the alley, I am afraid that even if the master writes the first three chapters poorly, non-die-hard readers will still not buy it. What about new authors? I won't talk about the writing style. The above is my purely subjective evaluation. I would be honored if I could help you. If it affects your writing status, it is not my intention. Come on!