Play as an Outlaw in an Infinite Game

It reads like a novice AI in a tavern, the emphasis is too fragmented.

It's been a round, please keep reading, thank you

The novice copy is not very good The first copy is not good The second copy is not very good The third copy is not bad It depends on the situation and then change it at the beginning. It is better to go directly to the first copy.

After reading a few chapters, the writing is okay, but I feel that the beginning is a bit disconnected from the title and the content of the copy, and it is not very attractive. You seem to be writing about the fourth natural disaster that causes destruction everywhere in the game, but the content is like a thriller park. Those who want to see the latter will not click in, and those who want to see the former will easily be chased away by the first copy.

After I came in, I found that the writing was pretty good But maybe I lowered my expectations because of the book reviews Keep writing, stop being like this

Please note that Drowning in Water (7) added about 3,000 words of content, which is roughly where Chen Wangyou got his wall-climbing skills and how Meng Duxing adjusted the defenders at No. 23 Huli Mountain. When I just updated, I counted and found that "Drowning in Water" was clearly Chapter 21 in the draft box, but why was it Chapter 20 in the main text? It turns out that one place was audited at that time and was busy repairing it. As a result, one less card was issued. If you think there is some content that doesn't match... You are right. I'm really sorry that one chapter was not posted. Review, you have done all the bad things, and I have done all the bad things.

After reading Parasite Crisis (End), I can see that the plot background design is good, the world view of the protagonist Xincheng is also good, and the protagonist's personality is outstanding enough. He is a protagonist who has the ability to calmly resolve problems. Now we are taking the low combat power route to defeat the situation wisely. Although I really want to see Infinite Style defeating all methods with one force, depending on the world view, the upper limit of the force value is quite high, and it depends on the author's arrangement. In the follow-up, will it be a weird infinite flow or an infinite flow in the direction of pure combat power? However, depending on the character of the protagonist and the needs of the plot, a lot of content can be written about a weird outsmarting flow.

The title of the book should be changed to "Endless Naraku", please pay attention.

There are too many ellipses, which affects the look and feel.

The author's character creation of the protagonist is quite good, but I feel that the author's short descriptions in the realistic chapters are better. The copy may be a little too long and the writing is not strong enough. After reading the copy halfway, I feel that I have no expectations. However, the real plot can be read several times without getting tired of it. Maybe the stall is a bit big.

If you have any questions, please leave feedback under this post... I read Parasite Crisis like crazy after reading it. Is there something wrong with my pacing and plot writing? Then I won't write such a long book in the future.

The writing of "Retreat" is so messy that I can't understand it at all. Is it borrowed from some game and needs to be preconceived? After reading four chapters, I still don't understand what the protagonist is doing.

Good book, good book, come on, don't be a eunuch

I don't know why, but the content and logic are pretty good. But the reading experience is just not good, it looks difficult and messy.

The subject matter is good, but the more important thing is not to output the story and settings, but to unfold the story based on atmosphere creation and perspective switching, so that readers can immerse themselves in your story. Rhythm management is also a problem.

It can be said to be a pure running account. The author suggests improving the writing style first. If you want to know the specific method, you can try to directly modify the thriller park, and carefully understand how to write the story in three days and two nights.

What does Naraku mean? Falling from a high altitude?

Why doesn't the author use personal pronouns? The protagonist's name is so popular that it makes my ears numb.

I'm still reading, the writing style is good, I hope to continue writing.

Big boo