Steam: Immortal, I Just Want to Make a Living as a Rat.

It feels a bit familiar. Have you written it before and then cut it? I remember there was a similar article about Mouse Detective + Extraordinary

Being very verbose about small things wastes time and writing power. I don't understand why the mouse is registered as an assistant in the police station just for a few wages, how to explain the origin of the mouse, how to clarify the cult background (the author's background is that Animal Cult is a cult), how to avoid the endless harassment of the cult, the talking mouse, do you think the orthodox cult scientists, rich people and nobles will rob it. As long as the mouse is not exposed in the dark, it can be used as a trump card. It's easy for Peanut to control the rats and then make money. Simply send the army of rats through the air vents into the vaults of banks, nobles, churches, gangs, etc., And get money easily. Why expose Peanut's fake assistant and pay for the pitiful consulting fees. I don't understand that many authors have wonderful writing skills, and they fly into the sky and escape the earth as they write, and do whatever they want without any taboos.

It's bad, author, don't scare me😦

Unfortunately, I don't have any more monthly passes in my hand. I will make up for them later, and the writing is pretty good.

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

The progress is too slow. The plot should develop faster. Also, has the author written a similar novel😐😐

After all, he is still a eunuch, what a pity

I hope the protagonist is an aborigine and Shushu is a helper for the time traveler. After all, the local aborigines are more favored by the world.