Times: Is Everything Floating in My Space Full of Garbage?

It feels too stretched. Since the protagonist has traveled back in time after serving as a soldier, he is still at home waiting to be bullied. I really can't stand it. Is it possible to gather around the spot to support? After the brothers were caught stealing cattle and taken to the police station, the protagonist should be wrapped in the furs of another world and squat on the roadside from the village to the town. When the enemies passed by, they would pick them up one by one and bury the bodies in the other world. Who would find out?

There is a space that can accept people at will, so the person named Li must die? In the end, no one was killed, and everyone was waiting for retribution. This kind of protagonist is written by this kind of author.

In 1982, life was poor and difficult, but it was not so poor that several people in the village had no firewood to burn, right? The dead branches and stems of the crops grown in a single year can be enough to burn for a month or more than half a month. If the family is active enough to go to the mountains to find firewood, it is impossible not to have enough firewood even in winter.

I've written 40 chapters, but the main conflict is still for firewood. It's really speechless for you to taste the plot you wrote.

After reading all the comments, one or two of them make sense. If they are all like this, the author should stop writing novels and do something else~~

The setting is very good, a different world with abundant materials. The writing is terrible, with low IQ, low ability, and low cognition. I am begging for food with a golden rice bowl. Give you 100 million and you will still be a beggar, so adventure and money cannot change your nature.

Comments say that a small southern city is short of firewood. I can believe this. But what kind of environment do you write the male protagonist in? There are mountains, woods, and wild animals around him. Is there a shortage of firewood at home? The rural life I know is that I go to the mountains to collect firewood every day throughout the year, or at least go to the mountains once a few days a week in two seasons. He also said that the mountains and forests belong to the public. What's wrong with the government, can the villagers freeze to death? What you are doing is not living in a feudal society. No one cares about cutting firewood in the mountains, it is just deforestation indiscriminately. If you go up the mountain and don't cut down the branches, of course it doesn't matter if you just cut down the tree. I have heard that cutting down trees is sinful, but I have never heard that cutting down branches is sinful. If the male members of the other party's family are afraid of being bullied, then use a kitchen knife to have a good chat with their family at night. If that doesn't work, all the male members will be chopped to death and run away. You are a good person who pretends to be a chicken when your whole family is about to freeze to death. Anyway, it's me who wants to force my whole family to death. I'll kill the other person's whole family first.

Is there anyone close to the author who has served in the military? If you look at those soldiers who have just returned from the army, they are not so rational or cowardly. If they offend them, they will beat them up. The protagonist's scout soldier's family was bullied to the point where he did not directly retaliate, but also considered it in the long run.

The author should be a young man in his twenties who has just entered the society. He has no human sophistication at all, and he has passed the protagonist's previous life to a forty-year-old. If he was thirty or above in his previous life, he would not think about the relationship involved in beating people so simply. People with power and connections can treat people. The bully's family was ruined. Think about it (Zhang Koukou). His mother was beaten to death in front of him and he had no way to complain. In the end, he took revenge on his own. It was very simple for people to disappear in the countryside in the winter, and to set fire to the mountains. These were serious cases there, and they could not be suppressed by ordinary relationships. There was nothing more to say. Instead, he grabbed the person and beat him. No wonder the results have been good

Author, you still need some common sense. In the countryside, even the landowners in ancient times did not dare to let people collect firewood. Even if it is your mountain, no one cares whether the people in the village collect firewood for their own use or not. Those eight brothers who went to occupy a mountain and did not let people collect firewood would have been beaten to death. Not letting people boil water for cooking is equivalent to forcing people to die. The village will not care. There are also forests in the mountains that provide firewood to each family. Why don't you eat minced meat in the modern version?

The AI ​​has amnesia, right? At the beginning, it was written that the whole family does not eat dog meat. Later, the eldest sister came back with two dogs to replenish her father's health. There was a civet cat in the front, but it disappeared in the back and was replaced by a dog.

It was written by a girl. To be honest, it seems that the logic is very illogical. You actually found a fruit tree. The fruit tree is okay. Why don't you think of a way to see if you can transplant rice seedlings and see if the fruit tree can be planted? Also, his father seems to be in poor health. Why don't you think of a way to see if that dog has any special fruit? Does it have any special healing effects? Give it to his father to try. It's too much nonsense.

Indeed. Honestly, forget it, you are a soldier and let people occupy the mountain? 8 Will never be separated?

Why not kill, your enemy. To hide a body in space is to disappear.

What are you writing about? He was reborn as a soldier and can't do anything!

It's not that good, I don't have life experience or common sense, some of the plots made me laugh.

It snows in winter and most of the village has no firewood. The protagonist's firewood is picked up and burned on the same day. The younger sister goes to touch the snails on snowy days. Really weird It would be better to change the name to "Rebirth of Firewood"

If you are writing about an era you don't know, it is recommended to ask the elders in your family to check the situation. In the past, ordinary people lacked food, clothing, oil and meat. Also understand why wild boars became protected animals. There is no shortage of food in the three northeastern provinces and along the coast. There is less fuel in the northwest, but the northwest is more short of water.

First of all, let's talk about the direction. The overall style is biased towards fantasy (weapons and equipment, animal carcasses, furs, patterns on equipment, inscriptions...), So why write a rebirth story instead of a rebirth and time travel story? The direction of Rebirth should be more science fiction, right? The garbage picked up should also be biased toward science fiction, right? The second is some detailed descriptions. I don't know if the author is from a rural area or if he has ever learned about it. How much does a bundle of firewood weigh? How many meals can it make? When resources are scarce, should you only use the residual heat from cooking to keep the house warm or keep adding firewood? How long can a pig (medium-sized wild boar) weighing more than 100 or 200 kilograms eat? (Even if you are here to help. The guest can't just feed you meat, and it's impossible to eat it all the time. It must be potato, sweet potato and corn pancakes that account for 80%). In two or three days, a pig was eaten only twenty or thirty pounds. I don't know if the author had any thought when he wrote this... In summary, you can eat dry food, but the plot will definitely become more and more watery and eventually develop in the direction of a refreshing novel.

16 Books, that's it, the author should take a break and reflect~~