Red Mansion: the Soul Penetrates Jia Yun and Intercepts Hu Lin Daiyu at the Beginning

Why is the protagonist not a jade character? This is a generation different from Lin Daiyu. In ancient times with strict ethics, this was an insurmountable barrier!

The author's writing is still okay, but I personally feel that it is still a little biased. I believe that more than half of the readers of the Red Mansion novel come for the garden drama. You can write about officialdom and imperial examinations, as well as literary and martial arts. However, there were too many plots about conflicts and confrontations with Jia Zhen in the past. Especially the protagonist's current status is not enough. It seems procrastinating to deal with Jia Zhen. On the contrary, the most important thing is with the various heroines. The emotional drama of the garden drama is not enough, and the basics are covered in one stroke. In this type of writing, I believe everyone prefers the emotional drama of the protagonist. To put it simply, if you take in a girl, if you can't control it well, it will become a harem. In fact, the harem is not bad. It is supplemented by literary and martial arts, and it is no problem to make achievements, and then subdue Xiaoxiao with the general trend or thunderous means. This is what readers like more, um... Shuangwen. It doesn't matter before it's put on the shelves. If you don't see what you want to see after it's put on the shelves, many readers won't pay.

The protagonist almost dies at the beginning, and his family breaks up with his uncle in order to borrow money to save his life. Where is the Jia family at this time? Why not borrow it from the Jia family? And there is a connection between the protagonist being able to enter Jia's house later, which proves that it is not completely out of the question.

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Jia Yun and Lin Daiyu were of different generations, and they couldn't bear to read books written by different generations.

I felt so tired while watching it, and then I thought about it. There were too many characters in the early stage, and everyone was talking and switching characters all the time. There was no plot conflict, which made me tired. I may not be suitable for reading this kind of book. I'm sorry.

This is indeed my negligence. I forgot to consider the time issue. It is indeed a very low-level mistake. The following are all Journey to the West, so I can only read it like this 😭

Why so many requirements? I think it's pretty good. A level 1 author, what else do you think? It's hard to make ends meet at the starting point

The traffic of Red Mansion is quite high, and the identity is very good. It can be read by those aged 15 and 16. The writing is not bad, but some of the writing is illogical and has a lot of poisonous points. For example, the protagonist's predecessor was just a boxing practitioner. After two months of self-study, he passed the county criminal examination. You are better than cheaters and systematic ones! Sometimes you can write in the Spring and Autumn Period. For example, you can write that the protagonist is 10 years old, or even younger, or even passed through the fetus, and then you read through it in one stroke and officially start the plot. This way of writing is logical.

I haven't read the book, but after reading the comments, I think the author cut it!

The writing style is simple and concise, with not many poisonous points, but the details are not described well, and there is no red mansion flavor.

I don't really like this style of writing. Nowadays, I find it refreshing and easy to read. How would you describe this style? Can any book friends tell me? (I'm not literate and can't think of words to describe it.)