
Gou Zai Tian Long Practices Dragon Elephant
苟在天龙练龙象
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- Ongoing
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- 283k Words
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- Martial Arts
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- Male
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- Wuxia Fan Fiction
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- 1mo ago
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- Qidian
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It feels so boring. There is no urge to continue watching the plot. Without the system, it is understandable that the pace is so slow. With the system, it only shows that the protagonist is a waste. There is also a protagonist who has no plan for his own martial arts.
Isn't this just a reverse cheat? Many people are not good at writing cheats, and there are many people in the National People's Congress who cheat in reverse. Moreover, there are so many powerful martial arts in Tianlong that you can have the opportunity to obtain, and running to join the Murong family is purely a side effect. Go directly to Shaolin Temple👀Seventy-two unique skills, okay, the sweeping monk won't bother you at all. Or go get Lingbo Weibu from Beiming first, and then secretly read the secret book. Jiumozhi can peek at it, but you can't? Do you still have to find a father to support you?
It's the kind of person who relies on loan sharks, lives are about to expire, and ruffians push the plot hard.
The pace is so slow, I thought it was an invincible flow
There are a lot of top martial arts, and they have spent thousands of years practicing martial arts. When they meet Ding Chunqiu, they are almost killed instantly. They have spent thousands of years either becoming immortals or opening up the universe, but the protagonist is killed instantly by Ding Chunqiu.
After reading a few chapters, the title of the book is indeed correct, it is indeed Dog in the Sky
Zhang Wuji mastered the Nine-Yang Divine Art and mastered the Great Shift of the Universe in an instant. It will take you, the ninth-level dragon elephant, two hundred years to reach Zhang Wuji's level. Is the protagonist a maggot? Such rubbish. Moreover, the martial arts learned are complicated and messy, and I have to learn everything I want. Originally, Jin Yong's martial arts focused on internal strength. Once the internal strength of martial arts skills is reached, you can increase your lifespan. With this lifespan, Dragon Elephant has already reached the eleventh level. The Tianlong has gone sideways. It is only the ninth level now. After one hundred chapters, the protagonist is not even as good as Jinlun Dharma King. Jinlun Dharma King knows that his strength is too great. Guo Jing has learned so many martial arts to be able to compete with the Ninth Level Dharma King 50-50, but he knows that being proficient in everything is not as good as being proficient in everything. Qiao Feng and Dharma King are role models. Who in the same realm can say that he can defeat these two people with a hundred moves. It takes hundreds of years to learn Xiaoxiang Kung Fu. What's the point of pretending to be cool? I really don't know what it means. We come to see Dragon Elephant Kung Fu to see one move that can be eaten all over the world, not to see the four different things. Isn't it good to live to the end of the world and live to the end of the world? Can you practice other martial arts techniques on your own? In my opinion, it is enough to learn four martial arts, Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, Great Shift of the Universe, Ling Bo Wei Step, Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, Dragon Elephant plus points, and practice the rest slowly by yourself, all by adding points, that is the giant baby, nothing.
This article of yours is too good, and the plot can't even be beat.
To summarize, what has been written in Chapter 60?
A fisherman boy, with a golden finger, pays homage to the Murong family. What is the main plot? I can't see it, I'm tired of reading it, I don't understand it, it's still the same mess, writing here and there, with no depth or breadth, and I feel tired after reading it.
It's really boring to the point of explosion. I've been wandering around the Mingjiao Fangla Jiangnan. Does it promote the plot? It's almost non-existent. How far have I practiced martial arts? I don't just rely on the system to practice. Is there any progress in interpersonal relationships? I only talked a few words with Murong Fu and Abi. It feels like reading sixty chapters is no different than reading two chapters.
Why can't I escape the system?
Ah? I can't practice anything else but Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu? What is this picture? It's not like you really traveled through time. The system stipulates that you can only practice this. You are the author! ! Can't you write something else? ? ? Or do you really think this martial arts is very good and many people will like to read it if you write about it? I'm really curious to know, not looking for trouble.
All novels whose chapter titles were poems were rejected without exception.
Big problem
Everyone can see that your preface does not match the follow-up, and there are obvious gaps in several chapters. In chapter 6, a master looked over it, but chapter 7 was skipped without any movement. In chapter 9, the fight with Deng was cut off to the next plot. Originally, the introduction was quite catchy, and the subject matter is not bad, but if you continue writing it like this, it will be over.
The writing is good, and I have no problem with being a retainer in the Murong family. After all, Goldfinger is set to exchange martial arts for lifespan, except for the Murong family and the Wang family. However, the author's writing is slow and the plot is jumpy. It stands to reason that skipping some plots will make the pace faster, but the author is amazing. He skips a lot of plots, but writes some messy Jianghu affairs in great detail, skipping what should be done, and still keeping such a slow pace. It is really amazing. According to your timeline, Chapter 60 will at least reach Xingzilin. You are so ridiculously slow. It's so ridiculous to put it on the shelves.
Dragon Elephant Kung Fu is the least cost-effective Kung Fu. Taking Jinlun Dharma King as an example, it takes 40 years to reach the 10th level, and thousands of years for the next three levels. A similar internal skill that has been practiced for thousands of years would be stronger than this.
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The plot is so boring. No highlights at all.
Hello author, I actually like Tianlong fan novels very much, but you have written more than 60 pieces and I don't know what you want to express. Is it going to be put on the shelves? If it is going to be put on the shelves, you write that it is going to be put on the shelves. I don't know what you wrote. I think the plot is a bit slow? Sorry if I've gone too far, but I really want to know if you'll finish it?
I wonder why so many authors like Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu. This thing is not particularly powerful in the novel. In the original work, no one can practice it to level 13. To put it bluntly, the rest is deduced. There is no way to verify whether it can be paired or not. Similarly, there is the Great Shift of the Universe in The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying. The highest level is wrong and cannot be practiced. Of course, the author writes the book, and the author's settings shall prevail. I wonder if many authors have in mind the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, which is the prerequisite of the Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Kung Fu.
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The writing is smooth, the plot is okay, and so is Goldfinger. I hope that when I encounter someone who deserves to be killed, I will kill him to the end! Otherwise, there really wouldn't be much to see.
Thirteen-story dragon elephant with 1,300 kilograms of strength
I guess I originally wanted to find a different approach and come up with a novel setting, but it turned out to be a big mess and not to the readers' taste at all.
It's been over a hundred chapters, and my martial arts skills are still so low that Dog Meat can't even get on the table.
It's very well written. If you keep writing, I'd like to read "Apricot Grove"