I Was Loaded into a Love Game by Them

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The writing is good, but the plot is not great. There is always a feeling that the male protagonist is being taken advantage of. All in all, it is just food and fodder. It should be considered a good book for certain groups of people

The male protagonist in this book is a character who resists falling in love. This is what I have always wanted to read. I have read a book before about a male protagonist who pursues true love, but that book didn't describe much about the male protagonist's transformation, and it felt like the protagonist's character traits were completely lost. This book really considers the male protagonist's changing views on love, and is a rare book that pays attention to the male protagonist's character. On this basis, the girl next door is too close. I feel that the male protagonist does not avoid her, and even takes the initiative. In terms of plot, some people say that the plot is old, but I don't feel this way. The main events of the heroine Morikawa are quite interesting. Although they are classic event types, the development and resolution of things are different. It's just that most of them haven't started writing yet, so everyone may just use formulas to think how things will develop. At present, only Morikawa's character creation has been completed, and the other female protagonists have not yet been written, so I can't feel the likability of Ichinose for the time being. Essentially, there are too few problems. The writing style is okay, and it didn't make me feel uncomfortable reading it. It would be a bit annoying to always say some classic Japanese comic lines. Wouldn't it be better if it appeared when the male protagonist is thinking about it instead. Regarding the system, the system only appears more frequently at the beginning and basically disappears later on. However, if the system appears frequently, there will be hidden dangers, which is somewhat contrary to the male protagonist's pursuit of true love. What the male protagonist would think if he found out that several female protagonists are close to him because of the system is also a very interesting point. It depends on how the author writes it. (Actually, I think it would be better to change the system rewards from skills to some wonderful tools, so that the plot will be promoted without having too much impact on the heroine's numerical value) Come on, author.

When I first saw the title, it had a strong sense of déjà vu as "I was simulated by them in love". I really liked the writing style of multiple heroines + system, so I clicked in. Let me talk about the conclusion first. So far, it is a quite slow love story. The framework and plot rhythm of the article are not like online articles, but like traditional galgames with long common threads. The plot itself progresses slowly, and the climax of the plot progresses slowly; the alternating creation of multiple female protagonists further amplifies this point Good news: the writing is okay, and the plot design is not a big problem Bad news: not suitable for following up The main reason for this feeling is that the ups and downs of the plot are too flat. I'm not a professional writer and I don't know what the problem is. I feel that the system's presence is too weak and the contradictions are not highlighted In the first few chapters, the heroine was pushed through the plot, and the heroines later appeared one by one to develop the character system and have no sense of existence In addition, is the uneven arrangement of the heroine's roles a small problem? It is easy to forget who the person in front of is when reading. When reading, I don't feel that there is a main thread connecting the plots of the heroines. The new heroine appeared after one chapter of the plot and no one was found for a while. Except for the plot about the writer next door, it doesn't feel out of place if you write a separate story about the female lead

The writing is actually pretty good, but it probably doesn't have an outline, so the plot is a bit confusing and the character settings are not fleshed out enough. Come on.

I can't stand it at all...

After Morikawa's self-destruction, the male protagonist's character changed too quickly, but it felt wrong... The character design of two people in two lives was not implemented to the end.

I don't know why there are so few people. To be honest, this book is more readable than the current crow. In my opinion, the crow is right after the witch 💩

It's a very interesting novel, but there are too many wooden cabinet scenes that affect the viewing experience, and the system presence is ridiculously low.

When will it be put on the shelves? It's well written and supports it.

I think the plot is actually pretty good. It obviously borrows from several Japanese novels, but it also combines it with my own characters and adds my own twist. The biggest problem with this book is the OOC character design, because at the beginning, I thought the male protagonist was the kind of person who is afraid of trouble and has an indifferent character, but later it turns out that he also has his own pursuit and persistence. This kind of character is quite delicious. However, are there some words that may be a little redundant for the male protagonist's character? This is not to be picky. In some places, I still hope that the author will pay more attention to establishing the male protagonist as "indifferent but persistent". The following is an example The male protagonist wanted to know about Morikawa's past, so he asked his friends. I think this is unreasonable for the male protagonist's character. Because this may lead to more troubles, inquiries from friends, etc., But given the personality of your friends, you can pass this time. My persistence refers to the matter of tutoring Morikawa Miyuki. Counseling begins with a threat, a threat that cannot be called a threat. During this tutoring session, the male protagonist did understand that Miyuki Morikawa was truly sincere and wanted to learn. This had nothing to do with the male protagonist, but even humans would be slightly shaken by this feeling, right? In addition, the male protagonist and her are in a study group, so it is normal for her to help. As for the rest, during the holiday, it was a sincere request, and the male protagonist tentatively agreed to the invitation, which is reasonable. Later, when solving the "Bus Incident" 5 incident, the male protagonist tried his best to help her. First of all, he felt pity for her. Although it was her own fault, the male protagonist should also be curious about her motive for doing that thing. Secondly, the male protagonist also learned about her past and felt pity. Thirdly, he solved her problem by solving his own problem. The reason why the matter was settled so quickly was also because of his own actions. The obvious flaw was that the male protagonist did not ask why he had to force her hand.

The writing is good and the plot rhythm is not bad. Who is the reincarnation of this powerful person?

Can you reply 😭😭😭

It feels bad to travel to other worlds and then embody some songs, novels or movies and games from the past life. As I said at the beginning, these are two similar worlds, not the same world. It can be said that the original author does not exist at all. How did you get the pirated version? I still feel ashamed when I write someone else's song and then it is praised. The problem is that there is no original author at all. Without this person, you are the only one who knows them in this world. Think about it from another angle, aren't you very selfish, or don't you feel lonely? In this world, you are the only one who knows, and there are some things that only you understand. In addition, you are obviously showing some of the things you know to the world. These are works that have been recognized by the world and can bring happiness or other positive emotions to others. Isn't this better? And if you really respect it, don't sign yourself, just write the signature of the original author. You are just a porter, you have gained money, the original author still has his signature here, and the original author is still the one who spreads. Why don't you want to do something that achieves multiple things with one stone? Is it just because of myself, an angry young man? To be honest, even if it is to advance the plot, this reason is really nonsense. Now that I have read Chapter 25, the character of the protagonist has completely changed. When I first read it, he was cold and inhumane. After a few chapters, he becomes angry just by looking at women🐶. He is soft-hearted towards beautiful girls and curious about beautiful girls. It is really outrageous.

Even the investment is so small, it feels okay

I feel like the writing is pretty good. Come on.

Why are there no main character pictures, illustrations, negative reviews?

It's just a little twisted. Maybe the author just likes this, which may lead to a bit of a niche and not very good results.

Wonderful, it's now on the shelves

Should I say that the writing is realistic? The female characters in the book are really annoying sometimes. The more characters you write about, the more this happens.