Water Margin: I Was Corrupted by the Will of Heaven

The new dream of the third floor, please bring it up quickly (I hope there are national highways, satellites, and eavesdropping)

Let me talk about the problems I personally see now. 1. It is said that it is erosion by God, but we cannot see where the erosion is. Not to mention the level of scripts like New Three Kingdoms that can find flaws in any 5 minutes, ordinary people really can't write like that, chaotic historical events, Hu Zou's human geography, abnormal time flow, God's will forcibly drives events to a fixed node, characters who speak with incongruous prefaces and follow-up words, top-notch wits comparable to kindergarten level, deviant and shocking violent opinions, crazy characters, unusually fascinating wine... Etc. There is none of the common contents of Tianyi TV. 2. The article is not on topic. The author's experience of the protagonist up to the latest chapter, compared to the so-called erosion of God's will, is more like the rebirth system time-travel article "Traveling through the boudoir of Yama, and surviving from the sword of Song Jiang with the system". The so-called providence is just the experience of changing history. At best, the article is not on topic, and to be honest, it is just selling the dog meat. I came in to see how God's will made the Water Margin a mess, not to see the protagonist open a hotel in Yuncheng. 3. The story rhythm is torn. After the first change of direction, suddenly the wife and children are on the hot bed. This is God's will. Sooner or later, if God's big hand exerts its strength, you will still die in Song Jiang's hands as a constraint. Why suddenly there is no sense of crisis. He opens a hotel with Song Qing, helps the county magistrate to take care of the widow, and fights wits with Wu Yong. This step should let the protagonist escape and then discover his mission - there is no way to escape. If you dare to escape, you will be killed by God's plot. 4. How to change it if you want to write it down. First of all, Yunlong Gongsun Sheng should not be so calm. As the mage among the 108 generals who is closest to the truth (the star descends to earth to meet the calamity), he should be aware of the great terror in the dark. Secondly, it is necessary to get rid of Zhang Wenyuan's identity. As long as the protagonist takes on this "role" for one day, there is a risk of being chopped off by Song Jiangping and sent away together with Yan Poxi, and find the real "password" (of course it will be with the heroes of Liangshan). Thirdly, all characters whose fate "changed" due to the actions of the protagonist began to show symptoms of God's erosion (intellectual retardation, moral decay, alcoholism and mania). The protagonist could only either join in and become a "Puppet of God's Will" to complete the stage play of Water Margin, or meet the conditions and "pass" under the nose of God's Will, or join the smart people who still have reason to resist God's Will and seize the power of the narrative layer. When the protagonist faces those "heroes" who have eroded too much and become puppets of God's will, the protagonist can truly understand that the object of wisdom is the unreasonable God's will, not Wu Yong.