Human Martial Venerable: Starting with Skill Fusion

It is said that it starts from the synthesis of skills, but more than 30 chapters are still not synthesized. 🙂

The protagonist can't synthesize it until he has cultivated to the realm of transformation. It's rubbish and unnecessary! If you reach the realm of transformation, the protagonist can integrate the skills himself, so why do you need golden fingers?

So far, I have discovered that your novels are good. The protagonists are good but they do not forget about the common people. In many novels, if they can help, they will develop on their own. If they can help, they will help. Development is the main line. Don't throw away these auxiliary lines of help.

The writing is messy! Don't understand

In this world where demons are rampant and aristocratic families control the power of force, Li Yaoyang, as the son of a grain merchant, uses plug-ins in his hand to combine various exercises with different effects into one. Others can only get one point of results by spending one point of energy, but Li Yaoyang can improve one point in several fields by spending one point of energy. In this way, relying on his advantages, he works steadily, and finally stands on top of the world.

After seeing 28, it is obvious that I have a problem. The author wants to write an all-rounder, at least until 28. Let's not talk about practicing martial arts and taking drugs. The strategy is at least high, but it cannot be written. There are many mixed elements. In the previous martial arts training, you came out with evil elements, Tao elements, and strategizing. You are very thoughtful in making Conan. There are really problems with the writing. At least it is uncomfortable to read. There are too many elements. I can't say that your writing is not enough. It is indeed that there are too many elements in the writing.

The writing is too scattered and has no characteristics. I don't know what the author wants to write

The protagonist has just entered martial arts in middle age