Riding and Cutting: Counterattack Starting from Poor Tenant Farmers

This is my first attempt at writing a novel, and I hope everyone can give you honest reviews. If you praise me, I will be very happy, because it means that my novel is to your taste. I am also happy if you criticize, because it shows that I can improve

The name of the protagonist should be changed, and the names of past and present lives should be unified. "Rosus" and "Rosus" frequently appear together, which will affect the reading experience, making it unsmooth and fragmented, creating reading difficulties out of thin air. The sense of fragmentation and dyslexia undermine the sense of substitution.

Personally, I feel that the character of the protagonist is a bit vague, and there are few psychological activities. The psychological descriptions are often made in the third person, and the sense of substitution is not strong...👀

To all the readers who are reading this book, thank you very much. This book has more than 60,000 words. It means a lot to me that you can follow it up to this point. But today I want to tell you some truth. I've been reading my manuscript over and over recently and found that the rhythm is very messy and the writing is very stumbling in many places. Moreover, I write very late every day, and my body and energy are increasingly unable to keep up. Many times I am struggling to hold on. I feel that with my current ability, I really can't write this story well, and I can't give you a truly good-looking work. So I thought about it for a long time and decided to stop this book first. I am not running away. I want to study hard, study other people's rhythm and writing style, and also adjust my physical condition. I want to spend some time improving myself. I'll come back with a better story when I feel ready. I hope to see you again then. I'm really sorry and thank you for accompanying me along the way.

Collected it, keep it up, if you can attract traffic from station B, you can attract more traffic. If there is traffic, you can also strengthen the contract signing.

In fact, the protagonist's emotional line does not need to be so dense, and it is only chapter 20, but it feels like a romance novel, with the theme of horse-and-blade, so the core content of the novel should be about leading troops, fighting, training, and a little strategy. However, this is not easy to write, after all, the water is too deep to grasp And since it is set in the Middle Ages, I think we should be more rigorous in terms of class. In horse-and-blade, players only need to increase their reputation to become a noble. But in reality, No, you can refer to the class classification of Game of Thrones or A Song of Ice and Fire. The protagonist must first become a knight from a commoner. This is the easiest and most common channel for commoners to enter the aristocracy, and then how to obtain their own fief. In Game of Thrones, there is a mercenary named Bronn. He fought with the nobles and finally obtained a fief and became a noble. You can refer to it. But there is a small problem. After becoming a noble, Bronn was looked down upon by the old nobles, because Bronn was still a mercenary.

Master UP, hacking and slashing is a genre that will limit a lot of traffic. You can choose Western history, which will have a larger reading base. The system can be replaced by something similar to a small object. In a fantasy world with low magic, the system can be replaced by a ring or a dagger. This way, the probability of publication is higher. It is best to add some jokes or the like in the text, otherwise most of the descriptions will be straightforward, and then write them. In the process, describe the basic world concept of the article. The world needs to come alive. When describing emotions, it is best to add some actions, body language, etc., And in the process of adventure, describe some characters, point out the pits, etc., Write it down on a piece of paper. If it is useful later, you can use it directly. The number of characters cannot be too many. I just feel that the spoken language should never be repetitive and wordy.

There are too few chapters now and we still don't know whether the protagonist will take the Superman route or the command route, or balance both, unless the protagonist immediately goes to Bataan to recruit troops and activate the lazy dog ​​command mode. I hope the author can complete an epic adventure in Calradia to make up for what players and readers have not experienced in the game.

I came here specifically from Station B and have been watching the author's horse-and-blade series.

Thanks to Kunlun Mountain's Kun Yu, Mr. Xiao Luo, and fellow Taoist Zhong for the reward. Thank you very much 😭

Come on, I'm chasing you from station B 🤓

It seems to be okay so far. The high-quality products may be a bit unreliable, but they are expected to become the fodder for Qi Qianwen.

Congratulations on signing! The wonderful story behind Qi Luoxu.

Have you ever been a sharecropper? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted ✊

I have seen a very novel way of writing a map before. Find a biscuit and slap it with your palm. If you want the map to be denser, use more force. If you want the map to be less dense, use less force. Then use your feelings to gather mountains, rivers, and people living near the rivers. Start slowly adding terrain, cities, and people. In this way, the world will feel fuller.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

I really want to complain. I have traveled through time for 4 days and it is normal to divide the land. But there is food growing in the land, and it is the kind that can be harvested after a while. This is a bit unreasonable 🙂

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