Doomsday Soul Card: Start from a Withered Grave

The content looks familiar, isn't it from Tomato?

The card part is good-looking, and the abilities and cheats are also interesting. But what's up with the name? It feels like everyone I meet is the son of Xiu'er, Que'er, or Feng'er. The protagonist has made enemies one after another before he has grown up. This kind of slap in the face is really a bit like the seventh aunt and the eighth aunt.

Add a heroine, it would be great to show off your sister

In fact, I couldn't stand the first chapter because my family was already poor. It's really unacceptable for the protagonist to drag his parents down for the future.

Meng is new to writing novels, and I would like to ask for advice. If you have any opinions, you can give them. I will revise them as soon as I see them. Thank you!

Oh my gosh, not many first orders

It is not recommended that the first book of the eunuch is unfinished, otherwise it will have a very bad impact on the subsequent writing of the book 🙂

🤭🤭🤭Come on

It's very beautiful, don't be impatient, write it down slowly, come on 👍👍👍👍

Not bad, not bad. It's been a long time since I read a card article. Come on, author! 😍😍

I know when I send it out, sometimes I am pressed for time, but I still need to revise it. The character names are misplaced and there are quite a few typos and misspellings.

😰😰😰Do you want to read more?