From Covering the Sky, Merging the Heavens, Others and Me

The beginning was so confusing that I felt confused while reading it. The setting is also a bit confusing. Each world is full of false alter egos. The supreme being is the true self, but there is no communication between them and the true self, and they have independent consciousness. Why are they so willing to return to the true self? Put yourself in someone else's shoes, if I were someone else, but I had an independent consciousness, I would not be willing to return to my true self. Looking at the settings of those 99 streams, either everyone is the same body, sharing power but not interfering with each other. Either it is a human being who inherits the power of the dead person and replaces him for the rest of his life. You feel that everyone has a self-love plot, has a wife and power, but is willing to be inherited by the main body. And he and I are both like this. Does the body also have a self-greening plot? . . It is better to set Goldfinger as the protagonist to have thousands of incarnations, scattered in many worlds, sharing one consciousness.

The hodgepodge won't last long, the fantasy genre is just the fantasy genre, you can also add high-level martial arts, immortal warriors, etc. It doesn't look pleasing to the eye if it deviates from the traditional upgrade flow.

Zhetian Yi Qingwu has been collected, and Yan Ruyu and Zixia are reserved. Zixia's innate Tao fetus is useful, Yan Ruyu is bound to the Azure Lotus Emperor Armament and the Demon Emperor's Holy Armament, and the Demon God Flower cannot be wasted.

Personally, I feel that the world should be carefully selected. If the title of the book is "Zhe Tian", try not to write about the world of Death, Naruto, or even Coiling Dragon. The painting style is different, and forcibly blending them together will only confuse the perspective.

I still don't like this, there is no clear protagonist. Although you said they are indistinguishable from each other, I didn't see it from what you wrote. In my opinion, these are different from each other. Either you have a clear me and a clear protagonist like Qin Sheng, or else you will return to the original body later and give me the feeling of making a wedding dress for the original body.

I won't write it down to the end, but just unify him and me, return them all to their original form, and then land on the other side, right? It is a big taboo to take in a girl if you are a clone Either you write about the same time travel, without returning to the original body, only the combat power is superimposed, or you can return to the original body, he and I become one, and do not accept girls.

I can't understand it at all, it's written in a mess

It's so messy, and I feel uncomfortable looking at him like this.

After reading the first three chapters, I knew it was not my cup of tea. Today's time travelers like to accept disciples. I don't understand that you are alone and don't have to pass on the tradition. Accepting disciples can't increase your cultivation. You just start to accept disciples just to show off. It's disgusting🤢 This is not the age of recruiting disciples a few years ago, when clones were popular. You still play this old routine...

At first Ziweixing thought she would take another route, but in the end she still took Ye Fan's route, but it was sped up.

Currently, one person has completed the next chapter, with Zhe Tian as the main perspective, including Dragon Clan, Mysterious Resurrection, Coiling Dragon, Gu Realm, Death, Perfect World, etc.! Dragon Sanctuary Magician Complete Rules for Mysterious Resurrection Human Dao in the Gu Realm Rules the Heavenly Dao The souls of the eleven series of Coiling Dragons mutate and transcend Hongmeng The God of Death transcends the Spirit King The characteristics of the other side of the perfect world are liquidated Covering the sky and cultivating the law of one life

Anyway, I haven't written it down, it's the feeling of the same person. It feels like people with the same name but different personalities

It's the author of your Zhetian combat power system. Should the follow-up performance be based on Shengxu's performance, or should you continue to use Zhetian's combat power performance? Because there is a big gap between Shengxu and Zhetian. From the current point of view, Zhetian's worldview is more like the real world of the Supreme Being. The people inside are suppressed. From Shengxu, it can be clearly seen that after leaving the big world, the world's combat power will increase infinitely. If Zhetian's combat power is at the level of the Great Sage, it will only reach its limit after a week. In Shengxu, he is called Tianzun, but he can sweep through an infinite light-year small underworld universe. The gap between the two has reached A height that cannot be ignored, especially the subsequent realms are even more exaggerated. It can even be said that the performance of the quasi-immortal emperor of the Holy Ruins has been able to completely suppress the performance of the other side. There are extra performances on the subsequent sacrifices, and even the clinking of glasses can destroy an infinitely superimposed world view in an instant (simply put, one dimension is an infinite world, and then two dimensions are composed of infinite one dimensions, and then continue to superimpose until there are infinite dimensions)

The writing is a bit messy, with too many intersperses.

The continuity of the description of plot twists is too stiff

To be honest, the writing is good, but the possibility of being a eunuch is very high 🙂

The protagonist ruined the plot, was unable to quell the chaos, and triggered the dark chaos in advance. He deserves death!

Zhe Tian: Cultivating the Dharma for one life; Perfect World: Great Reckoning; Immortality: Breaking the Gate of Eternal Life; Mortal Cultivation of Immortals: Re-cultivation of Celestial Immortals; Panlong: Refining Hongmeng Golden List Artifact Spirits; Gu Realm: Humanity Rules the Sky; Dragon Clan: Dragon People Annihilation; Mysterious Resurrection: Rules to Become a God; Death: Beyond the Spiritual King; New introduction is still planning and adding worlds, mainly fantasy, you can join the group for discussion

Why is he suddenly invincible? It's such a big leap. Does the author have an outline?

So little

Why does it feel like the back part is the same as the outline?

Why don't you go to the Immortal Realm?

It's too messy, with a hoe in the east and a hoe in the west.

The back doesn't look good at all, where's the problem? Even after the Immortal Emperor, you are already invincible at the beginning. When you become enlightened, you can rule the nine heavens and ten earths. The Dark Lord will be afraid of you. Isn't it easy to become enlightened in two hundred years? As a result, I didn't understand the plot. The protagonist felt a bit lustful but lacked the invincibility. So what if I let them go? Anyway, I have the confidence.

It seems uncomfortable to change it back and forth. This type of writing should be divided into chapters. I change the map every now and then.

The back is fast and messy, leaving a mark

The development is so fast later on, just keeping a running account

It's a headache to read, it's a mess, can't it be one world in four or five chapters? There are only two or three worlds in one chapter, changing back and forth. I haven't entered the state of any world before changing worlds. Changing back and forth.