I Wanted to Make a Garbage Game, but Why Did It Sell Out Again?

At present, I have seen 40 chapters, and there are five or six games produced. The plot of each game is very simple, just like a painting, with only an outline and a little background, no details and no focus. A brief review can only be regarded as average. There are currently no major negative points, but there are no bright spots. There is insufficient foreshadowing, insufficient details, and no deep exploration of the game industry. Everything is superficial. Nowadays, AI is so developed that it is very easy to look up information. AI can also help you how to write, but if you don't take the novel seriously, readers will only read a few chapters and then delete it.

Pokémon, without accumulation, it is impossible for the mega to detonate. At most, it makes people think that the game design is good and there will be no explosion effect.

After reading the first chapter, I felt a little weird. From the beginning, I thought the male protagonist was under the control of his senior. In order to get his senior to go back, he would deliberately make a bad game, but it became popular. Or they might deliberately present a bad idea as if it is possible, and let the senior sister play a game, and it becomes popular. But I saw that there was another system at the back, one where you didn't have to worry about losing money, and the male protagonist was still an orphan. If there is no front, it will be the kind of rich man who loses money and has his senior sister as his subordinate. After reading the first chapter, I think the author is going to do the latter. In this case, I feel that the beginning can be changed to make the male protagonist a student in school, or about to graduate, and has not yet found a job. The orphan can remain the same, because he is afraid that he will have no money, so he can make money seriously, and the senior sister can continue to be a subordinate. The senior sister's ability to make games is still good, just because the male protagonist does not want to make a good game, and then he becomes popular after taking the responsibility.

To be honest, the emotional line is very delicate and immersive, the plot is not bad, the main line of the game is a mess, there is no introduction to the game, and the feedback from players is also very rough. After more than 20 chapters, I was jumping to read the emotions. Now that the emotions are on the right track, I am satisfied and ready to retreat. More than 60% of the games are not well written and it is difficult to get good results in the game division. Otherwise, you should go to female channels or urban areas 😁

The beginning directly boosted the male protagonist's negative perception. The content of the game was written as if it were not written. I don't even know what the point of the novel is.

The rhythm is too confusing, and the basic skills need to be honed more.

This stupid male protagonist is rich and still lives in a shabby rented house

Everything else was fine, but I had nothing to say when I saw Pokémon. Obviously the guy who wrote the book probably doesn't play Pokémon.

The logic of contrast is not written well, I don't understand it.

Not far from tj. Recent updates have been slow, the logic is confusing, and the rhythm is obviously wrong.

The sense of narrative is very poor, and it's a bit tiring to watch.