1980The South Wind Blows!

He was 20 years old in 1980 and died at the age of 44. That was the time in 2004 when China had high-speed rail takeaways.

Who is the author writing this for? Although you wrote about Cantonese, your Cantonese language persuaded you to leave. Not all people who read books are Cantonese!

1. I am from Shaanxi and have only read the first chapter so far. A lot of dialogue is written in Cantonese, which is difficult to understand. You have to guess based on the context, which is a bit tiring. 2. The protagonist was 20 years old in 1980 and lived to be 44, which means he died in 2004. There was no 4G network in 2004, and online live broadcasts had to wait until 2005. Live streaming of goods only started in 2016. The most important thing about chronology is realism. Originally, you can't write this or that, but if you write the year incorrectly, it will be very dramatic. The dialogue is all in Cantonese, which is very unfriendly to readers who don't understand Cantonese. I was confused when I listened to the book. Hope it can be changed.

Directly mark it for Cantonese speaking area, and distinguish between non-Cantonese speaking area.

People talk about live-streaming to bring goods, but they don't mention the platform. In 2004, there was a shopping TV channel. What happened to direct TV to bring goods?

Which teacher taught the author to write like this? A sentence is like a paragraph, and people who read it will go crazy and want to smash their mobile phones.

If the author really wants to continue writing, the most important thing to do now is not to write a new chapter, but to revise the beginning, otherwise it will be too overwhelming.

It's very well written, but it gives me a headache to read. I'm from outside Guangdong.

The writing is very good and detailed. It may seem boring to newbies. It is suitable for bookworms of more than ten years.

This book is really encouraging. It feels like a script. Did you want to change it into an AI comic when you wrote it? With lots of dialogue and concise descriptions, the more you look at it, the more it looks like a script.

It seems to be divorced from the general environment and background... It seems to be very fragmented. How long can the Canton Fair last? I remember it was about half a month, right? It can't be more than a month at most. You've written more than 70 chapters like this but it seems like it's already summer.

What's the point of writing about Lin Yaodong if you don't write about Tazhai and don't lead the whole village to get rich? Only when 1/3 of the "ice🧊" in European and American countries is made by your Tazhai Village can we be considered successful!

In those days, one had to either make grand plans within the system, or portray economic benefits, which were tangled and entangled, highlighting the professionalism of a protagonist, and being constrained by various aspects. You were writing a novel, not a biography 🤫🤫🤫