Naruto: What Do You Mean You Are from Motou Village?

Do you mean you have to pay for your own props (chakra)? What does it mean to consume less chakra than normal release? If you write: It only takes a little chakra to activate the scroll, I will think that you have tried hard.

A lot of data is not correct. For example, the third generation saw the protagonist using the Chidori using the telescope jutsu. Danzo suddenly appeared the next second and knew about it. How come your subordinates reported it faster than the third generation saw it using the telescope jutsu?

Touch your head, touch yours, touch yours, don't worry, everyone can touch your head...🤭

Touch yours

Don't you even look at the number of fragments? Or do you think it won't change even after readers pointed it out? There are only a few chapters in this book. Is it possible that Duan Ping doesn't have time to read it?

I didn't quite understand it. He really took part in the Chuunin Exam, won the championship in someone else's territory and awakened his talent. And the strangest thing is that the Third Kazekage allowed him to bring so many elite ninjas, and he was slapped in the face without saying a word. The Chunin Exam was just like an ordinary competition.

To be honest, I think there are some parts that are very debatable, or whether the author has thought it through. The first protagonist said that he learned ninjutsu after seeing others using it. So what if someone uses something that the protagonist doesn't have, and then the secret scrolls you draw are all released in the form of scrolls. I think it's superfluous, and if you don't think that a scroll can release wood escape, it seems that there is something wrong with you. Furthermore, no one in the village is a fool. No one will say a few words without any foreshadowing when you show up, and they will think that you are trustworthy or something.

I didn't read it, but I'm blindly guessing that Bro was so miserable after being tricked by Ma Ban that he went to the starting point to write a book, right?

The method of licking Tsunade makes people feel psychologically uncomfortable, but the rest is okay. After all, my understanding of Naruto is basically from fan fiction, and the timeline and other aspects are just passable for me.

The timeline doesn't match up. The character's status doesn't match.

In addition to the different appearance years and characters, it is just a reskin of "Shippuden"... And it is still copied mechanically. The Sand Ninja is in the desert, and there are actually famous scenes of Konoha's Death Forest, the Central Tower, and the Second Pillar Chunin Examination... As long as the outline is neat, the AI ​​will not be so perfunctory when writing it.

I became a eunuch as soon as I got it. .

I am unparalleled in the world, what do you call me?

I'm old, and now I can't understand most of the novel introductions.

It looked like he had been beaten red and warm.

Only loads skills but not the corresponding chakra amount? Then if you draw a strong one, you can't let it go.

There is a question, how does the protagonist explain the origin of ninjutsu?

As for the secret scroll, he starts with Dominant Body A The solution powder interrupts the opponent's attack without distinction

The characters are all fixed templates, and this world is the protagonist's own infinite Tsukuyomi world. Everyone ignores bugs and follows the established route to participate in the script. There's nothing interesting about it, you've been invincible since you got the system, it's been smooth sailing all the way to the end, but you can't change anything, you can see the ending at a glance. Boring.

According to the current patch of Boruto's Yin Seal, the protagonist can directly inherit all the blood inheritance of some character cards by using the Yin Seal perfectly, without having to change cards frequently.

The basic skills are fine and I can continue reading. Another flaw is that after the drawn ninja goes into battle, he can add a usage proficiency (or other conditions) to be able to fuse with himself. Or write in detail about the abilities of ninjas in battle and their own learning process. Although you can change ninjas into battle with one click, I feel that it is not a bad thing to strengthen your own learning. Or add one more. Every time you use a ninja card to defeat an opponent of the same level (limited opponent), it will be considered a perfect fusion and strengthen yourself. Wouldn't it be more fun? Otherwise, you will always rely on cards, and the final upper limit will be the upper limit of the card. Only by breaking through the limitations of the card can you have more expectations.