Guozhou

The writing is really good. It's very good for a newcomer to write at this level. But the pace is a little slow. It feels a bit boring in the early stage. Save it first and read it later.

The author's ability is limited and he wants to express too many things. This writing power is too lacking, and the writing style is not like online writing. If the front is a flaw, then the back is a big problem that is difficult to deal with. The style and atmosphere need to be shaped.

From the first glance, it can be seen that the author wants to write something, but he is a bit of a literary youth. I quite appreciate the writing style, but it may not be in line with the public's appetite. The second starting point is indeed a bit harsh on newcomers. This kind of newbie author has no traffic. I don't know if an author like this still has the perseverance to persevere? The third one is actually mainly traditional Tianwen. I haven't seen anything particularly novel so far. Of course, novelty or not is not important. What is important is whether the story can be told well and in a different way. His rhythm is not fast, so I still have to read this thing and wait and see how he writes it?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Why isn't it updated? The writing is okay