This Taoist Is Too Young

It doesn't feel right. The author seems to have not controlled the development of the plot well. He just relies on God's will to forcibly create a field with similar cultivation levels and forcibly excludes those with high-level cultivation levels. It stands to reason that everyone knows the future situation and will definitely pay attention to the information around them. If there is any trouble, they will know it immediately. The protagonist has been walking around the crater, but in the author's description, especially the woman, she always guesses the identity of the protagonist. Then when you encounter a strong enemy, you can kill him directly, and if you ask, you will be invincible with the aura of Daozu. I feel that if I write this way, this book will have big problems.

The protagonist can quickly upgrade while crossing realms crazily. Others will be injured and their future will be ruined. The protagonist's injured foundation will be strengthened, and the strength of the first level will be built. He can cross eight levels of small realms ➕ one level of large realms and kill strong men in the Condensation Stage. These are considered normal settings Ridiculous The setting is that even if the protagonist builds the third level of foundation, he cannot use the middle-grade spiritual weapon, because the middle-grade spiritual weapon can only be used in the middle stage of foundation building. The protagonist cannot give full play to the strength of the middle-grade spiritual weapon, even if the protagonist's strength is to kill the peak foundation building, it will be like killing a chicken.

It means you are not the Taoist master I am not being serious. With that timeline, there should be no suffering, or you commit suicide, commit suicide by force, and force him to come out. The timeline is completed

The protagonist's sense of morality is too high, so I can't read it. This character seems a bit depressing, not as good as a happy person. In a world where you are alone in your power, can you become a god by virtue of your morality?

Is there no one there? The old bookworm has identified the good grass.

Isn't this just plagiarizing my own magic fairy?

Is this the best two books stitched together?

The idea is very good, but if you don't have a lot of preparation, writing this will be 100% guaranteed 🪖

If you write like this, it will last you a lifetime. Just open a new timeline in the next book.

Brother, you should rest on your laurels and update more. Otherwise, other people's grades will get worse and worse if they stop watching.

Write your own second creation. . .

Is there any book similar to this one? I like this theme.

Is that head catcher sick? How dare he even have no trump cards?

Why do I feel like I've seen it before? The protagonist is also Zhang Yuanzhu

When I saw the book title synopsis, I thought it had been plagiarized.

To be honest, the only shortcoming of this book is the update problem. If the quality does not drop and it can write seven or eight thousand words a day, I feel that doubling the subscription score will not be a problem.

The subject matter is quite good, but it was not introduced well in the early stage. How strong and difficult it is to improve Qi. It seems very lagging to see how long it takes to practice Qi. Then the combat description is also unsatisfactory, and various aspects of training are also unsatisfactory. My personal suggestion is that if you can't describe this new power system as well as the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, you can use the normal power system of cultivating immortals. Quickly build the foundation of heaven, build the foundation of heaven, and understand everything that everyone understands, such as the invisible sword and the ability to defy the sky. Otherwise, after watching it for a long time, I realized that Qi training in this world is stronger than ordinary Qi training, but the combat description does not highlight how strong it is.

The idea is quite good, but the result is the cause. I already know the final result, and everything in it feels like there is no climax. After all, there is a big figure who has been watching in the future, and I have no desire to read.

You have to die several times, otherwise there will be a bunch of people around, giving this and that, you think you are Liu Xiu. And the villains are not all fools. If you think about Daozu refreshing next to me, I must keep a low profile. For another example, I am the demon king who will be killed by Taozu in the future. The reason why I want to be killed is because my Tao is fundamentally impossible to be recognized by Taozu. In this situation, you must take action at all costs. It is just the difference between dying early and dying later. The protagonist must die several times at this time to make it real.

When will the new book be released? That type of book I Will Become a Demon Fairy in the Future and the World Knows It I quite enjoyed reading it. I hope to open another one.

It's pretty cool, I just want to see if I can get a clone to be the Taoist master.

Why don't you write it? Is it over? Finish the book, the investment will fail again in two days 🙂

I asked why it felt so familiar. It turned out to be the author of the book "Magic Fairy".

Although I'm still following your book, the 4,000-word update volume every day should not be mentioned as 6,000 words when it is put on the shelves. Damn it, the 6,000 words dropped to 4,000 words in just a few days.

The pacing is okay, the plot arrangement is a bit simple but not bad, and the writing is okay. The author is a bit path-dependent. He uses the same words for some similar pictures and scenes, so it seems to be a bit repetitive. If this can be changed, the look and feel will be much better.

Why was the Dao Ancestor who was described as such a badass being fucked at the beginning?

You seem to have failed at writing. The characters you wrote are too arrogant.