Soul Land: The Dragon King's Divine Advent

It's boring. I keep writing the same thing as the academy. It seems strange to live for tens of thousands of years and hundreds of thousands of years and then transform into another person to go to school with a bunch of kids. Although I know Dou San is like this, I have never seen Dou San and Dou Si.

The omniscient and omnipotent god of justice, the master of destiny, the god of freedom, the god of justice, the god of light, the master of order and law, the god of wisdom, the god of wind, the god of rain, the god of thunder, the god of snow, the god of the sky, the god of war, the god of triumph, The god of hospitality, the god of supplicants, the god of sorrow, the thrower of stars, the all-powerful father, the all and above all, the source of life among the gods, the totally uncreated god, the creator of creators, the eternal king🙂

I accepted it, and QQ Reading poisoned me as soon as I finished ordering it. I didn't distinguish between priorities, and little poisons kept coming. The protagonist was hesitant about some small things, and the avatar was conscious. I tolerated it. I accepted followers for no reason and became a philanthropic boy for the original protagonist group. I tolerated it. I couldn't expose anything, and I had to play house for fear of trouble. I tolerated it, Lord. I couldn't stand it when you confiscated the Snow Emperor at the beginning of the gladiatorial battle and turned the ice and snow into lilies. However, you wrote so many plots that inexplicably failed to advance the plot. You made up a blue silver emperor who took the initiative to be Tang Wulin's soul. I couldn't stand it. You deleted 80% of your content without affecting the development of the story. I can only say that the idea is good, but the writing is really bad.

666, There are lesbians, suspected gays, and girls who are given away. I have been following the handsome guy for 6 years but I haven't fallen in love with him. I've met the one that I've met for three days and it's gone. I wasted more than a thousand points, so I'm withdrawing.

As a Greek pantheon, the protagonist should have been a sky god when he was born. How could he still be a spirit beast?

Is Le Zhengyu Ni Die? In the original novel, Xu Xiaoyan didn't even fall in love with her at first sight, but Le Zhengyu pursued her. Xu Xiaoyan fell in love with you at first sight

He poisoned me to death. He sent his daughter away and ran away.

It's quite difficult to write. In addition to too many secondary creations that lead to too many loopholes, there are also clone mines.

The author is a godly man who knows how to hide poisonous points in more than a hundred chapters and then send people away in waves.

It's so watery that it's disgusting. There is very little effective plot. The setting is very good, but the author just lays out the setting and has no plot at all. He also likes to write nonsense. He writes more than ten lines over and over again in one sentence. The character creation is very poor. It can be seen that the author is a novice, but maybe too new. This writing level is almost that of elementary school and junior high school. Level, if it doesn't work, I allow you to use AI. 😅 Judging from the current situation, the only thing that can't match the virtue of this painting is pure handwriting, because AI is more than a hundred times more beautiful than this.