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The rhythm is a bit strange
Let's talk about the girls first. One of them is not confirmed yet, but two more come one after another. It's not a one-time relationship. It's very strange. In terms of strength, although it has risen quickly, it is still acceptable to Shuangwen. But I have always emphasized the need to work hard, and after working hard for a month, I have reached 80% without writing any words. I feel like I am not riding a roller coaster, but bungee jumping. It is too abrupt. And looking back, I only wrote a dozen chapters. Generally speaking, the author wants to write about everything, but he can't write everything in detail, and almost everything is written in one stroke. Come on, all I can say is
The written test is pretty good, but you are writing about football. What is important is football.
There is no focus in the early stage. Why is this sentence, all mediocre, not as outstanding as always? The focus is on football competition, and everything else is the icing on the cake. If there is a foundation, your icing on the cake will make the book reach a higher ceiling. The problem is that the foundation of the book is not solid in the early stage. This is not an urban novel, nor a historical drama, nor a Qiong Yao novel, sports competition, football is round, football is higher than life and death.
You say he is bad, not good, and you don't have much desire to read more.
Your experience card has become rounder at the beginning, and there aren't many young people playing it, so just keep checking it out! It's just that you have so many girls and you don't talk about them or have sex with them. You just show some innocent little boy drama out of nowhere. I really want to vomit after watching it 🙄🤮
The Brazilian mixed-race beauty you generated using AI is too ugly, right?
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I hope to start in the Bundesliga. The management of the Chinese Super League is still too chaotic.
Chapter 14, where did the 9 ability points for completing the mission go, and what is the mysterious gift package?
The writing is quite good. I only commented on it after seeing other people messing around. I hope Tsukuru sticks to his own style. To be honest, I am really tired of football novels based on battle reports. Game after game, the protagonist is just a kicking machine. What's the point? Such novels won't make much money, because readers will get bored of them! I suggest you read the book Night City Doesn't Feed Idle People! You have to make some money when writing a book. Most people give up on football novels about battle reports once they are on the shelves, so the author just works full time and has nothing to write about. Finally, cheers to the author