Survival in the Dormitory Starts with the Campus Beauty's Door-To-Door Takeout

You didn't choose the title of your book well. Your word count doesn't match your collection. The collection is really bad, there is no traffic at all. You should have lost the first round of pk, otherwise the normal amount would not have been collected.

Multiple heroines in survival stories? Let me judge

I feel that even if it is a post-apocalyptic survival story, there should be some communication between the male and female protagonists such as emotional language. It does not mean that men and women are equal and respect each other like in the modern world, but the male protagonist is the dominant one in terms of status. At least there must be some physical communication. Many female protagonists of apocalyptic survival stories feel like It's more like a tool without self. If the author can add some interactions between the male and female protagonists, such as rubbing the heroine's hair, giving the heroine a hug when she is upset, cuddling and licking the heroine while eating, etc., It will be more interesting to read. In the process, the heroine will be further investigated. Some physical and psychological descriptions can not only increase the length but also enrich the character's image. Since the author chose the harem meat genre, it is best to also add some interactions between the harems. The doomsday survival harem is a better theme, which avoids some plots that need to respect the heroine and have to be slowly advanced to quickly get to the exciting point. But now the author only shows the exciting point of accepting the heroine at the beginning, and then the heroine behaves more like an assistant, which is a waste of the original expressive power of this character.

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I said, there should be a facility recycling station or something, otherwise so many mahogany wardrobes would be boring.

I'm afraid I'll stop updating when there's so little traffic!

But why aren't all the professional abilities written down? At least let people know about them.

Is the teleportation building next? When will the monster resident copy be cleared? Or give it to other residents?

I don't understand, why can't you just jokingly ask what would happen if your sister was resurrected? Obviously the familiarity is enough, and Liu Yan himself is very cold and doesn't talk nonsense.

Remove the "takeaway" from the title of the book, make it short and clear Let's analyze the title of your book. There are several key points in it: "dormitory survival", "campus beauty (harem tendency)" and "takeaway" Are you sure you wrote "takeaway" in the "survival" article? Get rid of things that are not necessary to explain clearly. You can also use the title of the book to attract readers' curiosity (sorry) to read your first chapter. If it suits your heart, then read it Only half-covered can attract people, but if you strip it naked, you will be inferior

It's really too watery, especially after continuous upgrades. I'm not paying to see the hydrology.