I Have a Wanguo Game

The extraordinary abilities have been brought to reality, but the protagonist still treats him as a game and doesn't care at all.

Apart from anything else, the first thing you, the author, need to do is to clearly express the character's perspective. It is not a good habit to constantly switch perspectives between you, me and others, and it will greatly affect the viewing experience. Then, don't add pictures in the text, put them at the end of the text. It also affects the perception for the same reason.

This is a relatively rare original copy, and it is still a meat pigeon style. The author's idea is interesting, but the first copy was not strong enough, and it was too late. The characters sometimes appeared out of nowhere, and the foreshadowing was not done well. It can be seen from the second copy that my senses have improved after listening to the suggestions. There is obviously progress, but I don't know why the writing is a bit abstract. Is it to avoid AI? I feel that I have used too much force. The author needs to pay more attention to the scenes and scene transitions. The reality line has not been fully developed yet. Let's wait and see. What we are more looking forward to is the battle part that follows. Overall, it's still readable. Don't be misled by some of the comments. It's rare to see an original novel, so try to finish it!

It's actually well written, but the narration is too confusing and it's too uncomfortable to watch.

It feels pretty good. Of course, it's possible that I've been watching too much in the past few days and have been polluted.

When I first read this book, I was a little dissuaded by the title. I thought it was a Dihua style of villains. After reading it, I found that it is the kind of strong setting, high concept, and strong world view that I like~ It is explored in a kind of meat pigeon-like form. The whole book can be regarded as a large-scale "Decryption Spire" or "Reincarnation Cell". Every time you become a person, it is a new experience, you will experience different stories, and who will "I" be next time? I quite like the illustrations in it, the author is really attentive

Author, what should you do if your listing performance is not good?

If you have simple story lines with genres and memes you want to see, you can post them below and they may be selected.

1. Name Supports a variety of names. If it is an online name, it will fall into the gap of the real/quasi-real world 2. Race Supports various human races or non-human or Fury or animals or plants or aliens or... (I can't make it up, you'll have to figure it out) 3. Gender Like the previous option, race will limit gender. If you want to be asexual, you will end up choosing alien species, monsters, etc. 'S 4. The type of chessboard you want to appear (see the matching degree) Possible chessboard types in the future: Fantasy (more magic | more dnd) Science fiction (more interstellar | more dnd) Cyber) Urban (Supernatural｜Superpower) Horror (Ghost Stories｜Reality) ... 5. Let's try it out and write down the character background (but for reference only). If you don't have it, just make it up.

That's right, this is Assassin's Creed Syndicate. The writing is pretty good, but I feel like there are still a lot of things that haven't been unfolded, so I'll give it a try first.

The author looked into my eyes: Don't die

Let me talk about my reading experience. The first two copies seemed to me to be very bland. There is neither tension nor the feeling of being sure of victory, and the narrative makes me uncomfortable. The result is that it gives me a very poor impression. There seem to be at least three more lines in the back, but the author doesn't seem to have the corresponding writing skills. It depends on how to deal with them later. I watched it until the finale 🌙

There has been no update for a day. Is it a eunuch? 😭

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